Waking up in the quiet crystal palace has become routine to me. I get up and look in the mirror. That dark purple scar still remains from when I was sick with a magic disease called Wither Heart. Wither Heart is an incurable disease that is only detectable once the host starts showing symptoms. The first symptom is a strong cough followed by glowing light purple lines that appear on the host’s skin. The lins sting and feed on your magic. The disease has no effect on non-unicorns and symptoms can appear more rapidly depending on one's skill with magic. You have basic, one trick pony, advanced, and elite. Basics know a few spells. One trick ponies only know 1 spell but have fully mastered it. Advanced have mastered very hard spells. Elites have mastered every spell there is. I was an elite so I experienced symptoms within three days. I Don't understand why I got better when every other magic user infected with Witherhart has died.The more adept at magic you are, the more fatal the disease proves to be. My case was a miraculous one, only leaving me with scars instead of a grave. After starring in the mirror, I get ready for the day. I head to the kitchen after picking out my outfit for the day. My butler, who goes by the name of Deeds, was waiting for me.
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“RiteRight away madam”
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Deeds is a strange stallion who's always around when I need him for a task. He freaks out the other government officials, but I don't judge . When you have lived for 243 years you kind of get used to that sort of thing. After having breakfast I ran diagnostics on my pipbuck; a robotic voice then played.
(I'm not doing that for every one. Just understand)
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My skill makes me capable of forging armor and weapons out of star metal.
Either use "The skill" or "My skills".
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That last one confuses me more than anything else. I have never eaten a pony. I have eaten zebra before but is that cannibalism? I’d imagine the Ministry of Peace would have said it is, but everyonepony else would probably have said it’s just disgusting.
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At that momentAs the voice ended it's listing I reached the balcony. Looking out I, could see the rooftops of the many buildings in Crystal City, the capital of the Crystal Empire. The balcony looks out over the southern side of the city. Flying to see the north side I can see the ore mines to the north. It’s a good thing I kept the knowledge of those ore reserves under lock and key or else Luna would have had more incentive to pressure my parents into taking sides so the ore could be drained for Equestria’s stupid war. Now the ore is being mined for the Crystal Empire's industry. I flew over to the mines for their monthly inspection. The manager of the mine was in his offices when I arrived.
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“Oh! Welcome,EmpiresEmpress.yourYou're early.”
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“I know. I've had to reschedule my week on very short notesnotices, and I didn't have time to send a prayerprior notice.”
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We quickly walked around the mine, seeing if everything was operating without any problemsissues. untilUpon reaching the maglev yard, I notednoticed a few security guardsponies were apprehending asomepony. Walking over I noticed a maglev engine wasn't hovering as it should, and showed signs of tampering.
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“Common thief?” I ask the guards.
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“Sorry about this Empress. I’ll call a Maglev technician to fix the engine.”
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Before I could hear a response, I used my magic to triggercast a teleportation spell.
The wither heart is cute, but too in detail here. Later on, have a nightmare sequence of Flurry remembering her time spent suffering the disease, and its effects.
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The wither heart is cute, but too in detail here. Later on, have a nightmare sequence of Flurry remembering her time spent suffering the disease, and its effects.