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Thanks for the chapter! So, in addition to being a prince, he became the bearer of an element, I get more and more excited about this story. I have a lot of questions I'm waiting for answers, like was he married in ancient Equestria? If so was it with a pony or with some other race creature? Was it really just one or did he have more than one partner? And will someone from this new era win his heart? How did Equestria fall? Why did Twilight apparently try to erase him from history?
I hope I read until I get the answers. But one thing is for sure your story has a lot of potential and you write very well.
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All will be answered in due time. I don't plan leaving anything unanswered. Romance WILL be present in the story, (hence the tag). With whom? Well look for the subtle clues 🙃
Equestria's past and downfall will be a recurring issue, specially in the first half of the story.
If I end up catching up with the Netflix series and comics, I'll set this story in hiatus until more chapters are released and begin planning the two prequels I have in mind (one of them about his time in ancient Equestria, and the other of the time period since his departure until the downfall; both expanding on whatever small pieces are revealed in the current story).
Thanks a bunch for the support. Many ideas, and a few references to other stories incoming. Sit tight.
That last name is certainly not familiar at all. No siree.
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🙃🙃
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will you be doing the comics as well as the netflix series?
Congratulations you've done two things the writers never bothered to do. Remember that izzy is an inventor and remember that sunny is a history buff that wants to know what happened to equestria.
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I will do everything there is on G5 as long as I feel it's worth it. I'll create a coherent timeline between comics, MYM and TYT, and whatever comes from my imagination.
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I shall, not to worry. I want to explore the characters further than the Netflix series and movie did. Both the main and secondary ones.
There is something important you need to know. During the traditional unicorn sleepover episode misty told opalines version of the story which involved:
• the ponies being jealous of the alicorn queens magic. Which is false.
•misty says the princess (twilight sparkle) stole all the magic and hid it away somehow. The unity Crystal's acted as a dead man's switch. If ponies lost harmony the Crystal's cut off their magic. So what i think happened was that opaline wanted to control all magic just like in the g5 show. So twilight did what the princesses did when tirek attacked. Store pony magic into one source.
Except this time instead of storing magic she simply cut off every pony from magic and then told the ponies to hide the Crystal's.
• by far the biggest revelation was that misty claimed that the princess put an enchanted invisibubble around equestria so the queen (opaline) couldn't find equestria. This gives the following implications
1.equestria didn't disappear due Societal collapse but by magic.
2. If this was an invisible spell, opaline should have still been able to enter equestria because it's a kingdom not a movable object. the spell didn't hide it from view. It straight up made the kingdom vanish from existence. (Which explains why twilight's castle hasn't been located)
3. Did this spell exist in equestria? Yes it did! King sombra casted this spell against the Crystal empire. Making it dissapear for centuries before suddenly reappearing. I'm betting that Alexander is going to notice the similarities of the story and that specific spell.
4. Twilight knows how to use king sombra's dark magic. So it would be possible for twilight to do the same to make equestria and the ponies in it vanish temporarily as a last ditch effort. This would explain the absence of princess cadence, princess Luna, princess celestia,and princess twilight sparkle. Opaline straight up said alicorn's were immortal and it wasn't due to magic otherwise she would have been long dead.
5. If that was the plan that means twilight copied Alexander's plan of locking ones self in stasis for centuries then waking up and picking up the pieces but on a grander scale. Which is possible due to him telling starlight and starlight could have told twilight as a last resort.
6. While the show and comic conflict with each other. Its possible for both of them to work here. Since Alexander wasn't present during the actual fall. you ould write the dividing ponies to weaken their magic as the first phase then steal it in the second phase but was stopped by the spell making equestria vanish.
This could make the chapter that contains the traditional unicorn sleepover episode very interesting. As Alexander could give real life knowledge and make her question opaline's story. And misty's version of the story could help Alexander realize that equestria may not be entirely lost and can be saved someday.
I looked up kintober and lets just say 🎶the story begins with who's gonna win🎶 anyway sorry for the essay. I'm really enjoying the story!
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Any chance that one day you could do a spin off. Where instead of waiting for the future. He uses the magic chamber to back in time to the start of the g4 show. So he can prevent a terrible future from happening.
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Oh there was a misunderstanding. I said that you did remember their character traits unlike the g5 writers. And I really like the way you written everyone everybody is spot on!
I'm glad about the secondary characters. pipps coworkers were not allowed to shine as they should so I'm look forward to how you write them. I'm happy to see sprouts mom get some attention!
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I need to rewatch the Netflix episodes in more detail so don't end up coming up with inconsistencies. Still, the version Misty told the ponies was the one what had been told by Opaline, meaning it might or might not be true in all it's aspects.
Personally I think Opaline's character and motivations are a bit flat, at least as far we have been shown. I want to build the character better, there has to be a reason why she seeks the magic and control of Equestria so badly. Was it because of being denied in the past? Where does she come from in the first place?
The series and comics have yet to delve into this way more than they have, if they even end up bothering.
What I can tell you for sure is that: the process of the downfall of Equestria was not a single event, it wasn't caused by a terrible villain that wanted to destroy everything like it had happened before, many different solutions were tried and failed leading the characters to reach a desperate point, the intervention (or lack of) greater powers were tied to Equestria's final destiny.
The destiny of the princess is a complicated one. Perhaps it wasn't Twilight who stole Alex's idea of time travel...
The most terrifying escenario which lead to the downfall of society is the one in which it was the same ponies that were responsable. After all, they only needed a small nudge for things to spiral out of control.
All in all, I'll try to stick as close to the official plot as I can, but the script and conflicts between series and comics don't make it easy. We only got one season after all, perhaps things I write end up being different in future episodes.
Also I plan on working on Misty's character, but that is for future characters. For now, stay tuned for the ending of Alex's integration and the mystery of the missing Crystal.
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We'll see. For now I have MANY ideas to put on paper, so to speak. Depending of how fast I write and if I end up catching with the series I'll think about prequels, spin offs, etc. That's a problem for future me.
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One thing that always annoyed me about opaline was that she supposedly the villain responsible for bringing down equestria. But she acts more like a Saturday morning cartoon villain than a threat. Also mystery of the missing crystal. Is that from the comics or the show? Either way I cant wait!
You'll definitely have to deviate from the make your Mark plot since the show is allergic to leaving maretime bay. XD I have a feeling that opaline will shit a brick upon learning that Alexander lives.
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Right, still I am sure that for humanity to forget itself it would not need a war or a separation or a nuclear war just that everyone does it on purpose it is simply impossible otherwise despite all the wars and destruction of humanity. history whether by fire or language, we always have a piece of history etched somewhere we never forget, something ponies don't seem to have. I appreciate their own history, I mean come on they were in their golden age and are you going to tell me that hardly a single pony tried to see the past?
APPLAUSE DAMN, there is no better element that represents (largely and with some push) humanity
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Ah I see some things might be wrong in translation. It's Bio-Arcanología. The study of interaction and integration of magic and biology. It's important in reference of what kind of of investigation he did and what advances he provided to society..... And the consequences of doing so.
More details in the future.
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I need to write her more in depth. Her current motivations are too plain for my likes.
It involves the first 10 issues of the comic yes.
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Well at least alex will be able reunite with one friend from his past then.
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Are they?
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Discord. And yes
Neither did I.
Ahem… Kintober… FUCKING ROBOTNIK!?!?! OOhhhh shit it’s sonic in this BITCH
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Nah, it's a silly reference, you'll see in the prequel. I mean, a human scientist who stumbles with a bunch of talking animals and pretend to help them before, well, you know how it goes. G5 already has a nice crossover with the sonic franchise.