Losing her original goal Twilight seeks to "Fix" the broken world of Fire's Pit but forces seek to prevent her from doing so. Can she unmask the forces moving against her and rediscover her goal or will she be swallowed up in this hell?
The moment however is cut short when I hear a loud whistle come from the direction of Vo.
Vo. My man. Why? Do you, want her to start using you for shooting practice? Are you... into that? Why?
“You couldn’t have just kept quiet. Could you?” I ask but before he can respond I punch him in the chest feeling a satisfying snapping as my fist collides with his ribs.
“Better yet, it’s a deal. I won’t let you stray away from our path. In return let’s be side by side till the very end.” I say hiding the magic scroll behind Luna as my hand stays held out towards her. Without a second of hesitation Luna takes my hand and shakes it with a small smile on her lips. Sorry Luna, I can’t take any chances.
Idk why but I'm feeling pride *happy tears* i remember as if yesterday when she was ashamed to have porn in her library. Look at her now. So grown up manipulating folks and doing shady deals
“How pathetic. Grow up and take your punishment with your chin up.”
As a komfut(communist futurist), anarchist militant and lover of war and military heroism, and a person with a code of honor, i agree. This is pathetic behavior from Vo.
“Not right? Luna, he raped and killed so many people. He nearly killed me. He has no remorse for his actions even now. What is wrong with doing to them what they would do unto others.”
“Luna, Friendship and kindness won’t help you here.”
"Luna, sometimes being cruel is needed to set an example. Do I enjoy getting revenge, sure. But in the end it serves another means.”
“No buts, an evil done to evils is not evil. It is doing the world a service by punishing them. Look at all the evils back home that could never be reformed.” I say as I place a hand on her head and drag it down her mane in a gentle pet.
Is it concerning that my general philosophy is in line with that of Twilight? *worried look*
“You won’t ever become one. Not as long as I’m here. Monsters harm the innocent and enjoy it. They feel no remorse for their actions when they do evil to good people. I won’t ever let you do that.”
Why do i feel like that was less of a promise and more of a threat.
And why do i have a feeling luna wouldn't really mind it *kinky eyes*
Okay i have a question. Where is the baby? Ya know, Gelfree's baby. I would expect Twilight to be like, super protective of the baby now but I've nit seen her near it(baby boy or baby girl) or even mention the baby like at all this last few chapters. And i don't expect she has Vo babysitting because if it was me i wouldn't even let him near the kid. And i would expect Twilight to focus a bit on the baby. Given she couldn't manage to save either Gmora or Gelfree(i mean she did save Gelfree but she died in the end so I'm not counting it) it is only expected she sees the kid as her chance to make up for it. Also potential future concubine but let's not go there so quick.
Idk if you've had the chance to read the general of the dead army but if you haven't the plot is after World War Two when an Italian general is sent to Albania to retrieve the bodies of the fallen soldiers. More specially, he is searching for a lost dead colonel that everyone wants back and that's the main driving force of the story. Spoiler alert, the colonel's bones were found in the house of an old woman who had killed him for raping her daughter who later committed suicide but were then again lost in an accident. So the general not wanting to disappoint anyone back in Italy takes an unidentified skeleton that's the same height as that of the dead colonel and puts it in the coffin that was reserved for the colonel specifically and brings it back home saying the colonel has finally been found.
Reason why i mention that is because Gelfree, is teh colonel, and Twilight is the general. Twilight had made a promise to keep Gelfree safe, same as the general had a mission to find the lost colonel's body. And while both succeed in finding what they were looking for, Twilight saved Gelfree from Vo and the general found the colonel's remains, both of them were just as quickly lost again amd this time for good. In the end of the day, the general did fulfill his mission. He did bring the colonel's family, the body they were looking for. Sure it wasn't the actual colonel. But at least there would be a grave for the colonel in his home instead of a nameless grave to an unidentified desertor somewhere in a small graveyard and no colonel brought home. The baby is to Twilight, what the unidentified solider was to the general. A chance to fulfill her promise, the mission she set herself to in the first story(aka the prequel to this) do it would make sense to me if in this sequel you focused a bit on exploring the relation between Twilight and the baby, which i wouldn't be surprised if it was motherly.
I'm sorry if i went too much in depth for this it's just the muse and literature analyst in me are feeling rather inspired today and i couldn't help but point some parallels between your story and a whole unrelated other story LMAO sorry. But fr I'm hoping to see a bit of that baby. Oh gods that sounded bad. You know what i mean.
11514940 Yes. From all the fucking i think Vo would confused and forget to who he belongs to. He just a bit of a, rough reminder so to say. Very, very deeply rough reminder.
11514959 All good. I've never heard of that story before but it's very cool how the parallels showed up as you pointed out. The baby hasn't been forgotten but Gaurt has been helping Twilight take care of the baby. I do have plans for them and the kids Gaurt carries.
That though can't be expanded upon till later. Let's just say, yes it's Gelfree’s kid but they are also a certain other person's and Twilight struggles with that.
11514969 It's understandable that Twi would struggle with it being Vo's. But at the same time if it was me i would eventually overlook and ignore that and completely deny Vo any parental recognition.
At least Twilight hasnt got as far as making Vo want punishment, or even need it. Unlike certain very AU of Silverstream and other hippogriffs, and Smolder and other Equestrian Dragons?
Vo. My man. Why? Do you, want her to start using you for shooting practice? Are you... into that? Why?
Yeah what she said Vo.
Idk why but I'm feeling pride *happy tears* i remember as if yesterday when she was ashamed to have porn in her library. Look at her now. So grown up manipulating folks and doing shady deals
As a komfut(communist futurist), anarchist militant and lover of war and military heroism, and a person with a code of honor, i agree. This is pathetic behavior from Vo.
I'm still waiting for Twilight to fuck him tho. He can't appreciate dick unless he has tasted horse dick.
....
Hold on that's a suspicious thing to say. lol
Also i know Twilight has probably already raped him but ww didn't see it we're still waiting to see it.
Is it concerning that my general philosophy is in line with that of Twilight? *worried look*
Oh who am i kidding of course it's not concerning
Why do i feel like that was less of a promise and more of a threat.
And why do i have a feeling luna wouldn't really mind it *kinky eyes*
You just kissed nothing too kinky about it. But hot nonetheless.
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Vo is consistently and continually stupid XD
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XD
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Ohhhh buddy I am happy to say he gunna look even more pathetic as time goes on XD
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You expect her to dirty herself with his already used holes XP
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Same kinda. Don't tell anyone.
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Maybe it is... :3
Okay i have a question. Where is the baby? Ya know, Gelfree's baby. I would expect Twilight to be like, super protective of the baby now but I've nit seen her near it(baby boy or baby girl) or even mention the baby like at all this last few chapters. And i don't expect she has Vo babysitting because if it was me i wouldn't even let him near the kid. And i would expect Twilight to focus a bit on the baby. Given she couldn't manage to save either Gmora or Gelfree(i mean she did save Gelfree but she died in the end so I'm not counting it) it is only expected she sees the kid as her chance to make up for it. Also potential future concubine but let's not go there so quick.
Idk if you've had the chance to read the general of the dead army but if you haven't the plot is after World War Two when an Italian general is sent to Albania to retrieve the bodies of the fallen soldiers. More specially, he is searching for a lost dead colonel that everyone wants back and that's the main driving force of the story. Spoiler alert, the colonel's bones were found in the house of an old woman who had killed him for raping her daughter who later committed suicide but were then again lost in an accident. So the general not wanting to disappoint anyone back in Italy takes an unidentified skeleton that's the same height as that of the dead colonel and puts it in the coffin that was reserved for the colonel specifically and brings it back home saying the colonel has finally been found.
Reason why i mention that is because Gelfree, is teh colonel, and Twilight is the general. Twilight had made a promise to keep Gelfree safe, same as the general had a mission to find the lost colonel's body. And while both succeed in finding what they were looking for, Twilight saved Gelfree from Vo and the general found the colonel's remains, both of them were just as quickly lost again amd this time for good. In the end of the day, the general did fulfill his mission. He did bring the colonel's family, the body they were looking for. Sure it wasn't the actual colonel. But at least there would be a grave for the colonel in his home instead of a nameless grave to an unidentified desertor somewhere in a small graveyard and no colonel brought home.
The baby is to Twilight, what the unidentified solider was to the general. A chance to fulfill her promise, the mission she set herself to in the first story(aka the prequel to this) do it would make sense to me if in this sequel you focused a bit on exploring the relation between Twilight and the baby, which i wouldn't be surprised if it was motherly.
I'm sorry if i went too much in depth for this it's just the muse and literature analyst in me are feeling rather inspired today and i couldn't help but point some parallels between your story and a whole unrelated other story LMAO sorry.
But fr I'm hoping to see a bit of that baby. Oh gods that sounded bad. You know what i mean.
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Forgot about that
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*eats popcorn* go on
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Yes. From all the fucking i think Vo would confused and forget to who he belongs to. He just a bit of a, rough reminder so to say. Very, very deeply rough reminder.
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All good. I've never heard of that story before but it's very cool how the parallels showed up as you pointed out. The baby hasn't been forgotten but Gaurt has been helping Twilight take care of the baby. I do have plans for them and the kids Gaurt carries.
That though can't be expanded upon till later. Let's just say, yes it's Gelfree’s kid but they are also a certain other person's and Twilight struggles with that.
The baby though will show up soon.
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Let's just say Twilight has gotten really good at seeing what organs can be removed and grown back before a person passes out
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*licks lips* gooooood
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It's understandable that Twi would struggle with it being Vo's. But at the same time if it was me i would eventually overlook and ignore that and completely deny Vo any parental recognition.
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Ya, it will take some time though.
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Obviously.
At least Twilight hasnt got as far as making Vo want punishment, or even need it. Unlike certain very AU of Silverstream and other hippogriffs, and Smolder and other Equestrian Dragons?
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She won't force him to because that's no fun. That dosnt mean she doesn't plan to make him want it.
Stuff came up. Will get 2 chapters out tomorrow for you all but nothing today saddly.