Losing her original goal Twilight seeks to "Fix" the broken world of Fire's Pit but forces seek to prevent her from doing so. Can she unmask the forces moving against her and rediscover her goal or will she be swallowed up in this hell?
Luna doing Alchemy means she can research the entire potion tree that a real pain to generall get in games, and vast lava oceans would be like having near unlimited play feeding space for dragons, like Dolphins, just watch out for being buried in a tidal wave of eggs?
11512307 I came up with this Alchemy to improve upon the general concept in COC 1 and 2. I always hated the Alchemy in that game so hopefully my revisions and all that makes it easy to follow but Luna will be delving head long in to it.
The funny thing is I do plan to have the red sea be expanded upon and a sense of place expanded for the world, maybe even a map for Patreon supporters if i ever do that.
Can i say how much i love characters that are multiple minds in one body? Like i just love the idea it has a nice feel to it. Also is that the best you can do with Vo? It is humiliating but it can also be worse and I'm hoping you planning on worse.
11512351 Oh it will be worse, you remember bee girl. She isn't dead and Vo gets the same treatment and more. Trust me, you'll see more. this is just getting people who don't read book 1 caught up a bit and not in the deep end yet. give it like 4 chapters XD
Amazing I am so excited to see where is this story going.
Luna doing Alchemy means she can research the entire potion tree that a real pain to generall get in games, and vast lava oceans would be like having near unlimited play feeding space for dragons, like Dolphins, just watch out for being buried in a tidal wave of eggs?
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I'm happy to see you are excited. I'm happy to say that things are kicked up a whole lot of notches from the first book.
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I came up with this Alchemy to improve upon the general concept in COC 1 and 2. I always hated the Alchemy in that game so hopefully my revisions and all that makes it easy to follow but Luna will be delving head long in to it.
The funny thing is I do plan to have the red sea be expanded upon and a sense of place expanded for the world, maybe even a map for Patreon supporters if i ever do that.
Can i say how much i love characters that are multiple minds in one body? Like i just love the idea it has a nice feel to it. Also is that the best you can do with Vo? It is humiliating but it can also be worse and I'm hoping you planning on worse.
Also please don't make Luna anthro too. I'd much rather her be pony form even if some augmentations are inevitable to happen.
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Oh it will be worse, you remember bee girl. She isn't dead and Vo gets the same treatment and more. Trust me, you'll see more. this is just getting people who don't read book 1 caught up a bit and not in the deep end yet. give it like 4 chapters XD
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She will test things but I do plan for her to keep her pony form don't worry.
i hope this fic will have more transformation than the previous one
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think of the last one as an appetizer to set a bunch of things up that are expanded on in this book
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and more sexy too!
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Oh there will be a loooot more sexy. I have yet to show the fun sex parties up in the northern cities Twilight promised to go to once.
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and make Twilight tall like Lady D from RE8?
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Hmmm, well see. I don't know if it will be tall like her cuz ain't she lik 10ft XD
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like Markiplier said. "It's about power!"
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No, it's about drive
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na na na, it's about staying hungry
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It's about devouring your enemies whole
Oh hell yea, a sequel!
Oh hey will we still get glimpses of what's happening in Equestria? If not ok
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We will continue to see what's going on there.