In a broken home, Apple Bloom finds solace in her newfound hobby, photography. However, the more she uses her father's mysterious camera, the worse her behavior becomes and the more disturbing her photos get.
"Yeah," he nodded. "Well not like recently but there's a lot of victims they never found and ponies still go missing all the time. My brother knew one of the girls who disappeared before they caught the Westend Killer. They found her hair and a bunch of other souvenirs from other missing ponies in his apartment but he never told where the bodies were."
Let me just say I have how this story feels and flows, it has such a surreal atmosphere its amazing. The whispering motif Is giving me chills I hate stories that use whispering but also love them so good job, you managed to make me creeped out in the first few chapters and that rarely happens.
11618648 Thanks. The uncomfortable feeling of malaise that seems to come from everywhere here is something I want an excuse to put in everything I write now... even if it's not supposed to be horror.
11618730 The overall atmosphere reminds me of a book I read (which I've just been made aware got a mediocre film adaptation) My Best Friend's Excorcism. Just the building sense of unease and uncanniness in concurrence with adolescence. And now it's looking like there's gonna be a very uncomfortable love triangle just to amplify the horror.
Serial killers in Ponyville? Pshaw. Just don’t go in Pinkie’s basement or Shy’s shed.
Minor quibble I feel like “mafia” should be “la cosa neighstra” or something more in-universe.
Let me just say I have how this story feels and flows, it has such a surreal atmosphere its amazing. The whispering motif Is giving me chills I hate stories that use whispering but also love them so good job, you managed to make me creeped out in the first few chapters and that rarely happens.
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Thanks. The uncomfortable feeling of malaise that seems to come from everywhere here is something I want an excuse to put in everything I write now... even if it's not supposed to be horror.
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The overall atmosphere reminds me of a book I read (which I've just been made aware got a mediocre film adaptation) My Best Friend's Excorcism. Just the building sense of unease and uncanniness in concurrence with adolescence. And now it's looking like there's gonna be a very uncomfortable love triangle just to amplify the horror.
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Oh, yeah. I saw that movie but unfortunately didn't read the book first. I see what you mean though.