11393433 He supported the idea of Shining Armor winning in the end. But realistically Candace is already Celestia's property and he won't be able to get her back, but that doesn't mean it's the end of everything, where a door closes a window opens.
What makes me doubt is if in this AU Cadance was kidnapped by Chrysalis, because in that case Shining Armor X Queen Chrysalis could be formed. Celestia gets a princess while Shining Armor a queen. But it is also possible that in the end Celestia wins and Shining Armor stays at the bottom of the barrel, personally I would not like that ending since this Celestia is too self-centered about the fact that she is a princess and is superior to everyone else (which is true), in short, each one their fetishes in this story.
You will have to read the end of this story to find out, in any case excellent writing to the author, sorry if my grammar was not the best, my English is not very good.
Celestia has been built up rather heavily in this story as a Divine Sex Goddess She-Stud that would RUIN any mare she takes for anyone else. And how (even if they truly fell in love in the end), she was owed Cadance by sheer right as being the FAR superior lover compared to Shining.
I truly hope that all this build up pays off with Shining AND Cadance double teaming and completely dominating Celly, showing her who's TRULY superior. Would easily be your best story yet if that is the outcome.
...That, or Celestia deciding to truly show her superiority by turning Shining into a slut for her as well. Got a thing for big dicked mares on Twinks, so I'd love that too.
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He supported the idea of Shining Armor winning in the end.
But realistically Candace is already Celestia's property and he won't be able to get her back, but that doesn't mean it's the end of everything, where a door closes a window opens.
What makes me doubt is if in this AU Cadance was kidnapped by Chrysalis, because in that case Shining Armor X Queen Chrysalis could be formed. Celestia gets a princess while Shining Armor a queen. But it is also possible that in the end Celestia wins and Shining Armor stays at the bottom of the barrel, personally I would not like that ending since this Celestia is too self-centered about the fact that she is a princess and is superior to everyone else (which is true), in short, each one their fetishes in this story.
You will have to read the end of this story to find out, in any case excellent writing to the author, sorry if my grammar was not the best, my English is not very good.
Celestia has been built up rather heavily in this story as a Divine Sex Goddess She-Stud that would RUIN any mare she takes for anyone else. And how (even if they truly fell in love in the end), she was owed Cadance by sheer right as being the FAR superior lover compared to Shining.
I truly hope that all this build up pays off with Shining AND Cadance double teaming and completely dominating Celly, showing her who's TRULY superior. Would easily be your best story yet if that is the outcome.
...That, or Celestia deciding to truly show her superiority by turning Shining into a slut for her as well. Got a thing for big dicked mares on Twinks, so I'd love that too.
Either way, can't wait to see how this all ends!
Dang this is good, and I normally am not at an of anthro fics.
I really want to see Celestia Cuck Shining, and them getting into a happy three-way relationship.
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Of course, if it's truly three-way:
Celestia: If it makes you feel better, little Shining, pretend it's not throbbing! Then it's just like when my niece pegs you...
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Luna and Cele are both tops
their is a good chance that this Cadance is might actually be Chrysalis but i haven't read this story.
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THAT would be a twist. A pretty funny one, too.
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Wouldn't the idea of fighting for dominance against each other happen? (Or is that what nightmare moon was about?