I meant to comment about the story when it came out, but I'm very excited to see where this adventure goes!

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Thank you, trying to produce more OC driven tales and maintain my writing chops!

All eyes were drawn to the four women, who started to sin in unison.

I can't tell if this is a typo or wordplay.

In any case, so much for passive observation. Though this does mean our heroines can look into matters in greater detail. There's much to learn here.

11370775
Lol, definitely a typo but I'm tempted to let it stand!

Nicely done. So, they have still control themselves here?

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Yep!

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That's good, especially for the virgins...like candy for example

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I’d make adagio mines cause she entrances not only my eyes but my lust

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She's my favorite Dazzling!

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I’d go to town on her voluptuous ass and take here from behind

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Will the story ever be finished?

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I hope to someday, but since my mom developed dementia while I started writing it I've found it difficult to find motivation to continue. I really hate to leave anything unfinished since it lets myself and readers down, so I'll try to push through, even if the results turn out lousy.