Princess Luna extended her neck to look at the unconscious pony. “you gonna eat that?”

Next chapter, he will.

Yeah no, maybe for other people but Not me

(A month later) Edit: I just had the urge to say why it´s not mine. I read a lot of kinky Stories and generally enjoy vore, tf, tg, etc. (except submission of Twilight and the other mane 6). The Story itself is written well and I also read the sequel of it it could have been they survive somehow. Yet as I stated I donˋt like my precious lavender alicorn or her friends to be hurt, I like her wayyy to much for that. so itˋs as simple as that.

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Eating national heroes seems like a good diplomatic strategy. Gives rulers something to bond over.

But I'm pretty sure Celestia got dibs on this one.

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You got that right.

Isn't there a Death tag? Without it this story is probably gonna get a bunch of hate from readers expecting soft vore and characters to somehow survive.

Get ahold of yourself Thorax, he thought as Thorax shook himself out of the trance. Shaking his head he chugged the remainder of his cider and looked sternly at Rainbow Dash, “Don’t tempt me.”

"Take it, Thorax! Take it!"
"I dare not!"
"I'm giving it to you!"
"Don't! Don't tempt me further!"

Hmm, this chapter wasn't bad, but it could've done with a bit of a touchup on the first half; it starts with a lot of telling rather than showing, and then when Thorax meets Rainbow, the conversation has a very strange immediate swerve from a serious social problem to her wanting to be eaten for no apparent reason and with no apparent thought to what'll happen to her later. In the latter half, it's a lot better, but it's still weird Rainbow doesn't seem to think about digestion pretty much immediately after she's done clopping.