A selfish question due to my naughty mind. Did they rut with Spark Ignition? I know you often tend to leave things to be explained in future chapters However it seems they most likely never did.
Hahah! Of course, I understand that I am writing a story with detailed porn content, and frankly mature, lustful things. But at the same time, I'm still writing a story in which I pay attention to other details. I wouldn't be interested to know about how much progress Octavia and Vinyl have made with this stallion. It was during their youth, where every pony (this also applies to Human) was still trying something new in his life.
And yet, if such revelations and detailed descriptions are present in the plot, then first of all it concerns the main character. Although, I do not rule out that I can write something similar in the first person of other characters. First of all, it still concerns Vinyl Scratch.
P.S. And again I express my gratitude to you for supporting my inspiration while writing this particular part of the plot.
Went a little overboard with the lovie dovie. It almost comes across as a bad soap opera. Breaking into tears because it was sex and she wouldn't be his. Don't get me wrong, I liked the chapter, but I think you went a little too overboard with it. In my opinion it would have come across better if you had kept things a little bit more down to earth.
He still did not burst into tears, but at that moment he thought about someone else. Just didn't clarify it in front of Cadence. She understands everything perfectly well herself. But if Cadence said the name of this mare, she was afraid that it could only worsen the situation.
My fault is that I didn't specify who he was thinking about at that moment. Although at the same time he said something that could play an important role for him. Playing a love affair with Cadence is useless, but she forgives him. But what I showed in this scene is one of the variants of realism. Provided that I myself have gone through such moments in my life. So, these are quite ordinary things.
And yes, you must forgive me, but I am also a former theater actor, although it was in my younger years, but I still have a penchant for such scenes.
A drop of a tear, it's always a small detail. But even this does not appear just like that. It is important to feel this on an emotional level.
I have yet to show the different sides of the character of the main character and his psyche.
Zealot and Protector, Fourteenth Landgrave of the Sword without a Name. Max Ksenofil
I began to feel with my crotch the touch of her little udder, which rubbed seductively against my body.
Imagine, if his crotch was naked at that moment! :P Fight between naughty udder and a penis!!! She disrobed. He should have too! xDI know he undressed later on, but naked dancing sounds qute fun. Why should just the mares be constantly naked? :P
How come here Cadance is depicted pretty when disrobed. Yet Amira in the other story has to have her trinkets to look pretty. I think they both are pretty with nothing else on! xD
And with Celestia... you know, if she gets up on her hind hooves, like you are now, then I just won't be able to hold her, let alone her height.
I wanna see that!!! Experiments are fun like here with Cadance! It needs t happen! I'm speaking from the lence of not having read chapter 6 at all yet. Just from chapter 5 I got that .... desire/hope for it!
Lastly, I love the bite mechanic towards the end. This is what most horses do anyways. Just rarely see it done to princesses in stories. It's just normal for them.
PS: Go udder play all the way!!! Every mare needs to experience that. Pretty sure normal stallions don't care about that. They are missing so much potential
Edit: At first when I was reading this chapter I was debating with myself about Cadance being only his mare and nobody else's? Then I realized. He has many mares. Why shouldn't mares have several stallions too!?!? If a mare can have more then just one .... they definitely just should! :)
I don't even know how to answer the first part. But you know that Amira is almost always wearing erotic accessories. Personally, I think that the more precious metal (gold or precious) stones a girl or a mare (princess alicorn) wears, the less beautiful she is. It looks repulsive on a psychological level. (I could explain in more detail, but I won't do that).
1) Sometimes experiments can bring obvious traumatic results.
2) Yes, I like to bite in both stories. In my opinion, this adds new sensations during intimacy.
3) I could not answer the last part of the comment. This puzzled me.
Да уж, прочтение главы заняло ГОРАЗДО больше времени, чем я ожидал. А Архип времени зря не теряет, уже с принцессами мутит, еще даже не встретив Винил и Окти.
she had a little sex with my dick
Не знаю точно почему, но эта фраза меня рассмешила.
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Да, братан. Бывает вдохновение. А че Винил по русски заговорила?😆 Ну че крутяк! Давай ее к нам сюда. Мы ее научим плохому.
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The most invaluable comment. Thank you, bro! It really lifted my spirits.
But I can't promise anything about driven sexual desires, especially from one of the princesses.
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This is a really awesome suggestion to replace some words. I have made changes to the text. Thank you for taking part!
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Hahah! Of course, I understand that I am writing a story with detailed porn content, and frankly mature, lustful things. But at the same time, I'm still writing a story in which I pay attention to other details. I wouldn't be interested to know about how much progress Octavia and Vinyl have made with this stallion. It was during their youth, where every pony (this also applies to Human) was still trying something new in his life.
And yet, if such revelations and detailed descriptions are present in the plot, then first of all it concerns the main character. Although, I do not rule out that I can write something similar in the first person of other characters. First of all, it still concerns Vinyl Scratch.
P.S. And again I express my gratitude to you for supporting my inspiration while writing this particular part of the plot.
Went a little overboard with the lovie dovie. It almost comes across as a bad soap opera. Breaking into tears because it was sex and she wouldn't be his. Don't get me wrong, I liked the chapter, but I think you went a little too overboard with it. In my opinion it would have come across better if you had kept things a little bit more down to earth.
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He still did not burst into tears, but at that moment he thought about someone else. Just didn't clarify it in front of Cadence. She understands everything perfectly well herself. But if Cadence said the name of this mare, she was afraid that it could only worsen the situation.
My fault is that I didn't specify who he was thinking about at that moment. Although at the same time he said something that could play an important role for him. Playing a love affair with Cadence is useless, but she forgives him. But what I showed in this scene is one of the variants of realism. Provided that I myself have gone through such moments in my life. So, these are quite ordinary things.
And yes, you must forgive me, but I am also a former theater actor, although it was in my younger years, but I still have a penchant for such scenes.
A drop of a tear, it's always a small detail. But even this does not appear just like that. It is important to feel this on an emotional level.
I have yet to show the different sides of the character of the main character and his psyche.
Zealot and Protector, Fourteenth Landgrave of the Sword without a Name. Max Ksenofil
Imagine, if his crotch was naked at that moment! :P Fight between naughty udder and a penis!!!
She disrobed. He should have too! xDI know he undressed later on, but naked dancing sounds qute fun. Why should just the mares be constantly naked? :P
How come here Cadance is depicted pretty when disrobed. Yet Amira in the other story has to have her trinkets to look pretty. I think they both are pretty with nothing else on! xD
I wanna see that!!! Experiments are fun like here with Cadance! It needs t happen! I'm speaking from the lence of not having read chapter 6 at all yet. Just from chapter 5 I got that .... desire/hope for it!
Lastly, I love the bite mechanic towards the end. This is what most horses do anyways. Just rarely see it done to princesses in stories. It's just normal for them.
PS: Go udder play all the way!!! Every mare needs to experience that. Pretty sure normal stallions don't care about that. They are missing so much potential
Edit:
At first when I was reading this chapter I was debating with myself about Cadance being only his mare and nobody else's? Then I realized. He has many mares. Why shouldn't mares have several stallions too!?!? If a mare can have more then just one .... they definitely just should! :)
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Thanks for the comment, my hyperactive friend.
I don't even know how to answer the first part. But you know that Amira is almost always wearing erotic accessories. Personally, I think that the more precious metal (gold or precious) stones a girl or a mare (princess alicorn) wears, the less beautiful she is. It looks repulsive on a psychological level. (I could explain in more detail, but I won't do that).
1) Sometimes experiments can bring obvious traumatic results.
2) Yes, I like to bite in both stories. In my opinion, this adds new sensations during intimacy.
3) I could not answer the last part of the comment. This puzzled me.
Да уж, прочтение главы заняло ГОРАЗДО больше времени, чем я ожидал.
А Архип времени зря не теряет, уже с принцессами мутит, еще даже не встретив Винил и Окти.
Не знаю точно почему, но эта фраза меня рассмешила.
И да, ох и любишь же ты слово “revelation”