In Slutville, formally known as Ponyville, females still outnumber males three to one. So, for the Annual Harvest Fair, six of the hottest bimbos have decided to run their own booths for..."charity." Sure, let's go with that!
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I don't think that's quite what they mean by "never tickle a sleeping dragon."
I like this story but I was hoping for more Sparity. After a little foreplay Pinkie interrupts and then skips a tired Rarity who looks like she went through several rounds with Spike and you skipped all of them.
I hope for more Sparity but I assume that will come after the other girls get some "screen time."
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That was a conscious decision to leave what happened in the imaginations of the readers, as I didn't want to overwhelm them with too much imagery so soon after the "battle."
Rest assured, we'll be seeing scenes of "Sparity," as you cutely put it, very soon!
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Knowing FimFiction as I do, I know that if one reader voiced disappointment with something in a story, there were probably quite a few others that felt the same. SO, I went back and added the "Sparity" moments you were all missing.
Enjoy!
Thank you Mancin. You didn't have to do that but I'm glad you did. This was a great addition to this chapter and it end just as I had originally hoped, with Spike ready to go again be skipping to the aftermath keeping that "leave it to the reader's imagination," vibe you had intended.
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Thank you Mancin. You didn't have to do that but I'm glad you did. This was a great addition to this chapter and it end just as I had originally hoped, with Spike ready to go again be skipping to the aftermath keeping that "leave it to the reader's imagination," vibe you had intended.
I can hardly wait for the next for Rarity to "tame the beast" but until then I assume you've got plans for the other girls. I curious about Fluttershy who was oddly aggressive over AJ with Big Mac. Is that a foreshadow of some FlutterMac or will we see other partners for her like Treehugger, Bulk Biceps or random animals like a bear.
Could somepony Pease write the prequel to this story? Or is there a story that details the transformation of Ponyville to Slutville?
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Well, as 'Slutville' is my invention, I don't know of any other stories about it.
But, you've given me the idea: perhaps I should write the prequel which outlines The Change. I think that would be fun!