As far as my story writing judgement can go, you're doing a really good job so far

And yeah, a story with that kind of plot twist kinda forces you to give multiple hints about it before the story even begins, and even then people will be pissed about it, somehow

This story feels a lot more in depth than I was initially expected based on the premise and the fetish-y sounding setup, you're really pulling me into these characters!

How much longer till pt 3