i think the those pirates forgot what happens when you push a prey animal with nowere else to go. It will go through you not just to fight and live another day but to remove the threat from their way.
I like the idea behind this story, for I always found these stories more entertaining then others maybe cause it’s pirates and ships witch in and on itself is quite the different take then the usual. I do hope to see more soon, Keep up the awesome work!
11274696 There will definitely be more. I have 4 stories going right now lol. If I hit writers block on one I work on another until the block has passed. And I really like Pirates so im continuing this one :P
i think the those pirates forgot what happens when you push a prey animal with nowere else to go. It will go through you not just to fight and live another day but to remove the threat from their way.
My ship name recommendation is either enterprise or the black gem due to my lack of creativity
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I don’t doubt you, it’s just very atypical and kinda jarred me out of the story. No harm, no foul. 🙂
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Still though thank you for the tip. Ill have to remember that for better immersion and flow. :)
Thanks for the update!
I like the idea behind this story, for I always found these stories more entertaining then others maybe cause it’s pirates and ships witch in and on itself is quite the different take then the usual. I do hope to see more soon, Keep up the awesome work!
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There will definitely be more. I have 4 stories going right now lol. If I hit writers block on one I work on another until the block has passed. And I really like Pirates so im continuing this one :P