11207884 Yeah, sorry but no, there is definetly a market for these kinda stories in the site, personally the fact that only the first chapter is over 1000 words kinda ruins it for me, story flow and what not, i honestly cant say if there are any grammar errors on it since i havent read but playing it on people not liking it doesnt help improving it.
11208136 Well I appreciate your honesty. I had to do the 1000 word chapter which was the Prologue, because it wouldnt let me publish it unless it was 1000 words or more. You can also tell me how i could improve on this story or any of my stories, if you want to.
Why does this story have so many dislikes? I mean, it can't be that bad, right? ...Right?
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Its not that bad. I mean i put a whole lotta time into it. People dont like these stories
11207884
Yeah, sorry but no, there is definetly a market for these kinda stories in the site, personally the fact that only the first chapter is over 1000 words kinda ruins it for me, story flow and what not, i honestly cant say if there are any grammar errors on it since i havent read but playing it on people not liking it doesnt help improving it.
11208136
Well I appreciate your honesty. I had to do the 1000 word chapter which was the Prologue, because it wouldnt let me publish it unless it was 1000 words or more. You can also tell me how i could improve on this story or any of my stories, if you want to.