Flashing a grin, Carat came back holding a paddle that had such a long handle it was pretty much an oar. "Little princess, I'm afraid it's time for you to do your duty. These loyal stallions are due for their reward, which your little womb will provide, whenever you want it or not."
"No, please!" Flurry begged. That certainly wasn't the usual safeword, so all it got her was a powerful paddling on the rump. "Gyaaah!"
I would think they would do a little more prep work for the sake of the twins. Like be abnormally slow and deliberate with the typing up and going through the rules they already know. Flurry is a princess so putting on a show would be part of what she does.
11176920 You're absolutely right. But, to be honest, I found out I really dislike writing BDSM, so I wasn't too motivated on going back to rework this chapter. I'm writing strictly for the fun of it, so if it feels like a chore, I'd rather just move on.
And that, fillies and colts, is how the Equestrian Hapsburgs were born
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I would think they would do a little more prep work for the sake of the twins. Like be abnormally slow and deliberate with the typing up and going through the rules they already know. Flurry is a princess so putting on a show would be part of what she does.
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You're absolutely right. But, to be honest, I found out I really dislike writing BDSM, so I wasn't too motivated on going back to rework this chapter. I'm writing strictly for the fun of it, so if it feels like a chore, I'd rather just move on.
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It was a little over-the-top. I would like you to at least try a rough one again but a little bit more subtle.