Like I said on the previous chapter, you're moving too fast. The realisation of the transformation goes too fast and Stardust accepts it way too easily. Trying to keep the inner timberwolf under control also goes too easily, Stardust sets a limit and Appletree immediately follows it. There is essentially no conflict, no struggle.

I also you're often telling rather than showing. Like when Appletree transforms back into a pony you just write

she was herself again

which doesn't really show the situation, what's happening, it just explains what happens. If you're just explaining it sounds very dry and uninteresting.

The paragraphing is also very weird. Sometimes they are long and sometimes short. The long ones especially should be broken up. Try to find a rithm in when you do paragraph breaks so that they are all manageable for the reader.

But the story so far is pretty interesting, do continue writing!