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nice work
I think or this sentence gives the impression that Starlight is running around with Chrysalis?
I still have the feeling that Starlight does not create a decent member of society, but humiliates and takes revenge as much as possible.
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Merely dictating.
A little column A, a little column B. She still has to march onward to making Chrysalis useful through slow and arduous reformation, but having so much skin in the game does make her quite subjective as far as how she goes about it.
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it just seems to me that in this long journey, anyone in place of Chrysalis (if he has any self-respect) cursed Starlight more every night or cried at the thought of suicide.
I even thought there would be a scene where Chrysalis breaks down and throws the chain she's attached to the wall around Starlight's neck and tries to shape-shift. (Given that we were told that when changing shape, the chain tries to push out of the holes on the legs very quickly, then technically the chain on the neck can kill very quickly.)
11302787
Well, you're not wholly wrong. She would have to put a bite in the cable in order to do that, because otherwise, it would just toss her as the cable runs taut, but otherwise, yes, it would snap her neck. a pyrrhic victory, however, as now Twilight and the other princesses would kill her in the most painful and inhumane way imaginable, making sure to go nice and slow so that it lasts as long as possible. As such, the story would effectively be over.
Besides, I'm not properly tagged for that sort of thing.
There is a line separating realism from narrative cohesion, and while I'm usually happier to follow the more realistic route, I have an end goal of my own that requires that the main characters not die before the end of the story.
11302803
unfortunately, I personally know a real case when at school a young man could not stand the bullying and committed suicide. Therefore, I would not be surprised if, after killing Starlight and not being able to escape, Chrysalis took her own life in order to prevent the princesses from having a long and painful torture.
11302809
Again, I'm not properly tagged for that. This is not a story in which everyone dies at the end in a murder-suicide. It is unfortunate that people take their own lives in reality, but this is not analogous. This is a story about prisoner reform through carnal applications being reinforced until non-con turns into eventual-consensual, and then a little further.