In a world of Equestria, humans are seen as the average house cat, with some exceptions…
Pretty good man
Excellent work can’t wait to see what happens next
Cutely written, but let's see how things go in the next chapter. I'd like to see this world expanded on to show just how these relations really work.
Very well written and with a good pacing... could have stretched the foreplay for a bit longer, tho...Now to read the second chapter...
Pretty good man
Excellent work can’t wait to see what happens next
Cutely written, but let's see how things go in the next chapter. I'd like to see this world expanded on to show just how these relations really work.
Very well written and with a good pacing... could have stretched the foreplay for a bit longer, tho...
Now to read the second chapter...