A scientifically brilliant but antisocial former student of Canterlot High seeks out Adagio Dazzle, now alone and down on life. He promises to restore her powers in return for help with a massive scientific breakthrough.
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, okay, now the end of the chapter, that was hilarious.
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Just because the Dazzlings have a new perspective on life and humans, doesn't mean they're not still the same Dazzlings deep down.
Cross them at your peril!
So the story's namesake comes out at last.
This was a nice epilogue, except that it doesn't seem to be the end of the story? I'm honestly not sure where things can go from here, as both the plot and the respective character arcs of Radian and Adagio have reached their natural conclusion. Though I will say that I'm a tad bit surprised that they're electing to stay in the human world, at least for now. Adagio might not be smothered under an earth pony signal anymore, but she seemed pretty intent on her juice bar where she'd divide her time between singing for her customers and popping out foals for Radian...who has apparently also invented a Jarvis-style A.I. along with perfecting his emitter technology.
Ah well, I certainly won't complain about this story continuing!
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I won't deny that these last chapters (of which there's two left, one as usual on Tuesday and the last I'll post as soon as it's ready, but Sunday at the latest as per the schedule I set) could have acted as an introduction to those slice-of-life episode tales I wanted to move onto (which'll be a while, sadly, if only because I need to get back to other writing projects), besides a quick catch-up), I want to get into each episode with and focus on that enclosed story each time, with the trailing threads set in this story coming up from this one.
I also wanted to make sure it felt natural that the Dazzlings would have a reason to stick to the human world for some time. Aria really loves her music, Sonata her show, and their introductions into Equestria deserved some focus, so I'll save those for said sequel episodes as well. The only odd one out is Adagio, as even Ray keeps alluding to the fact he's not satisfied with the human world and finds it dull by comparison, but more on that in the upcoming final chapters.
And yep, overnight millionaire status isn't quite on the cards, so Ray had to take a more practical and long-winded approach. Not to mention a good Dazzlings tour would take a number of months. There's also a few things I may have hinted at earlier that I want to cover before I put this one to bed. Certain teases, promises and the like.
This is one of the best Dazzling fics I've read on this site. Amazing job.
Just one question: is that a real song, or something you made yourself? Because I would pay $$$$$ to see that animated.
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Thanks for the kind words!
Mistress, as with 'Adagio's Lullaby' (the musical theatre song she sung earlier on) and 'Somepony my Heart's Worth Beating For' are purely my creations. While I have a strong idea of how they flow and sound in my head, unfortunately I don't know how to play any instruments (and the less said about my singing voice, the better). I'm hoping to learn to play the keyboard when I can get the money and space for one, so I can put tunes to the music I write. Sadly this'll probably take a while.