For the record, I love Lyra and Bon Bon, just thought I'd mention that. They are without a doubt the cutest background pair.

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DAMN Even though I wanted a typical good ending (cloppy or not), dat ending made this story all the more powerful. Well played

1269169 Thankyou. That kind of was my intention. All over I wanted to see what kind of reactions this sort of story would get, and this is a good one. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_smile.png
1268891 Thankyou, but I hope if this brought tears you were still smiling in the end, otherwise I will feel bad dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Vinyl_sad.png

1269887 Yeah I listened to one of pinkie's songs always cheers me up..but yeah this stuff hits home kinda with some old friends of mine almost doing the same thing..anyways this was good definatly thumbs up worthy

i am so fucking depressed. i was really really hoping for a good end.

Poor Lyra and Bon Bon, such a couple ending like that.

And just when I thought everything would be fine. Still loved it though in a bittersweet way.

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I guess the whole time I was going for a darker ending, or as some would say, bitter sweet. The memories were put in place to help make people become more attached to the pair, so that when the ending came to be, it would have a larger effect. It was slightly depressing to write to be honest, I love these two.

1271184 Oh dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_rainbowderp_flip.png , I hate it when I write a depressing fic and someone's seen that suff go down in real life... Makes me feel like a bad person knowing I might have bought up some bad stuff in their mind dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Spitfire_sad.png

1273219 It's ok dear it's a good story you did nothing wrong so don't fret

1274074 As long as I haven't upset anyone with personal matters than that makes me feel better, and thankyou

Very well written...but still

reminds me of romeo and juliet ending :D

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Thank you, I'm sorry for tears that came with it dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Spitfire_sad.png
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While this wasn't inspired by that, I just noticed because of that comment how Romeo and Juliet-esque it is

what......

Anything that can make me is a good story and even tho this is a fanfic i feel like i know the characters better. Can't wait for you to write some more awesome Fic's

1301818 Thankyou very much.

great story, im sad that they died. i am at a loss for words.

1367608 It was a rough ending to write, but I'm glad you enjoyed it

I... I just...

1375350 I'm sorry for tears

1376423 No need for apologies, my good sir. A beautiful piece of work, I say...

1376504 Thankyou very much

all these feels...

1498282 I didn't realise people could still read this dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_TwilightWut.png Hope you liked besides the emotions dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Fluttershy.png

The feels are there I just want to but I cant cry

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GODDAMIT WHY PEOPLE ALWAYS WRITE FICS LIKE THIS THAT BRING ME ON THE VERGE OF TEARS AND THEN JUST BEFORE I CRY IT DOESNT SHOW WTF WORLD WHAT. THE. FUCK.
Past Sins was the ONLY fic the ONE AND ONLY FIC that has EVER EVER brought me to tears, and that time i was freaking bawling. why cant i cry at anything else

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that... was beautiful. thank you for that

Whoever disliked this is going to get their heads ripped off.

Wow I am enjoying this ^^ and someone on youtube requested me to read this fanfic so that's what I did Tough I am doing this one in parts as it is way to big to do in one take xD

and yes Lyra and Bon Bon are the cutest background pair

Keep up the great work dude ^_^ Epic feel time on your part man I know I am gonna really enjoy this fanfic

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I'm glad you liked it

1704397 Hehe I can't exactly blame them. This story isn't exactly for the faint hearted.

1829878 Oh wow, thanks so much dude. That would have gotten this a good amount of publicity.

My hat off to you sir… you made me cry. That is very VERY rare for me :3