Why make this porn? To me this premise would work better if this was just a normal story.

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Because that's what I want to write with a portion of this story.

You waited until 25k words into this to complain about the content within?

Between this and Forgotten: Sunrise, my desire for horse words will be sated!

Hitch and Sunny being embarrassed at the end is super cute. Although Hitch should try and get used to it now that both of his childhood friends are back in diapers! He should be the one changing Sunny as practice.

Now we just need Zipp and Pipp to find out about Sunny and Sprout, and the whole gang will be involved one way or another.

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Still haven't figured out a way to work them in.

I'm open to ideas.

11135271 Maybe Sunny misses hanging out with them because she's having a playdate with Sprout? So they decide to investigate?

I just love how nonchalantly every pony is being about this it's actually really funny for some reason

Also here's an idea why not get them to go to a play date with more adbl in town because the where you've written the chapter it makes it sound like there's a lot more of them in the town could be an idea to explore mliesprower06

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