Yo that's great thinking on spike's part

I wanted to note you because, as a writer myself, I am encouraged when I see someone cares enough to acknowledge they read what I posted.

I usually leave more DETAILED feedback, but I am not sure it would not be seen as trying to affect your story....

I will say it would be VERY refreshing to see (just for a chance) Chrysalis WIN...and to see Shining Armor's transformation...

I can say more if you want to DM me. but for now...Thanks again

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I'll be honest, it's not often that comments really have any effect on my stories. The events are usually set in stone from the outset, barring once when I started a story with no ending in mind, and a vote quickly solved that. The biggest changes that have come from commenters were, in one story, a faceless, nameless park ranger was replaced by someone's OC that fit the role decently. Not perfectly, but made enough sense to have him in the role. The other major change is that now I edit for other people sometimes to help clean up their stories.

If you truly wish to give a more detailed commentary, feel free to do so. If it just boils down to seeing Shining transform and Chrysalis win, I can only say that you will be either pleased or disappointed. I have, on occasion, let spoilers slip through the cracks, but I try not to.

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If it is set in stone, what woudl really be the point in comments? :) Not at all upset, and All I can say is I will continue to read...or not ;) No spoilers