also if a majority of people don't like your book don't stop writing it keep writing for you and the people who want to see how it ends but if one day you feel like you don't want to write it anymore then that's solely up to you
10948262 So, you are asking for specifics for the sake of the author? I can do that.
Author: if you use propper grammer and correct spelling, you are much more likely to get readers. It shows a disrespect for your own work if you have spelling errors and mis-capitalization in your description. If the author cannot be bothered to respect their own work, then why should anyone else?
Was that not one of your thoughts like hmmm maybe the author doesn’t know English so there might be some mistakes even if they know English they might fix the errors later on in the story
10948628 My mother tougne is Russian. And, I've just moved to America so trying use it all the time is hard. I figured if I practice typing it may I could speck it better. But if you know someone willing to edit I'd love to have the help.
Alexander stood wooden sword in his hands as he looked at Slasher. Slasher had started to teach Alexander sword and knife combat. Alexander’s arms and chest were bruised up, proof of how relentless Slasher was when fighting.
What about hands?
Slasher and Alexander charged one another, ready to attack. Three months passed like this, and to Slasher’s amazement, Alexander had learned to predict each attack Slasher threw how he would move or react to counterattack. After nearly one hundred Alexander had gained a skill Slasher had spent his life trying to master. Not only Slashers but any of the diamond dogs warriors after only ten or twenty sparring matches. Slasher began to wonder if he had found a young prodigy swordsman. He had learned how to fight timber wolves and manticores. Slasher had to wonder what would happen as he got older and kept up on his training.
What skill?
“I think I’ll go and become the strongest fighter. Then I’m going to go and find the guards who killed my family.”
Generally, showing that through narration rather than telling the reader works more elegantly.
really nice chapter dude, keep up the good work!!
What about the changelings
summery needs editing
kratos???
also if a majority of people don't like your book don't stop writing it keep writing for you and the people who want to see how it ends but if one day you feel like you don't want to write it anymore then that's solely up to you
Ew katana
14 likes and dislikes balanced as all things should be
I would not read this. If the author cannot be bothered to write a decent description it is guaranteed to be poor quality.
10947103
When you're description don't even have "," then you know it is bad
10948257 Are you trying to say something? If so, then be direct please. I am not a fan of word games or semantic ploys.
10948260
Oh ok
Because author of this story doesn't even have "," in description, it's very hard to read and some words don't make any sense
10948262 So, you are asking for specifics for the sake of the author? I can do that.
Author: if you use propper grammer and correct spelling, you are much more likely to get readers. It shows a disrespect for your own work if you have spelling errors and mis-capitalization in your description. If the author cannot be bothered to respect their own work, then why should anyone else?
10948271
Sorry, English isn't my first language.
Was that not one of your thoughts like hmmm maybe the author doesn’t know English so there might be some mistakes even if they know English they might fix the errors later on in the story
10948497 That makes some sense. Rather arrogant of me to assume you were just lazy.
10948628
My mother tougne is Russian. And, I've just moved to America so trying use it all the time is hard. I figured if I practice typing it may I could speck it better. But if you know someone willing to edit I'd love to have the help.
10948704 Afraid I do not know anyone for that, however there is a Group for it on here. You should be able to find someone willing to help.
10948704
are you stil writing?
10971242
Yes, but I guess you could say I'm a little put off now.
10971445
understandable
10971445
also, did you find an editor?
10974841
No
What about hands?
What skill?
How is he gonna find them?