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This was funny; maybe consider exploring this angle again in the future?
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Maybe, if I ever happen to come up with a good reason in a narrative sense.
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Going undercover or maybe a oneshot and put junior through some hijinks just for laughs.
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Those are good. If an opportunity for that eve comes up, I might. But I'm pretty far along in the story regarding rough drafts, so I can't promise that femgoji will return in the story any time soon.
Ok genderbending humor aside, how is Erika taking the news of her being a Transmutant now? After all Battra told her Monarch is responsible for creating them and now she has become one in their labs she should have some revelations to go over on the organization she works for and whether it’s worth it or not.
I'm sorry but I didn't really like this chapter all that much. I'm not a fan of genderbent stories and this didn't do much to change that for me. I think a better idea would've been to have Gojira turn into his beast form so that way we could how certain members of the mane six would react to it. It would also make sense in terms of the context of the chapter since wouldn't the alter ego of a transmutant be their beast forms? This is all my opinion, I still really like your series, I'm just not a fan of this chapter.
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I understand. Hopefully the next chapter will be more of your cup of tea.
This was a nice little break from the normally intense narrative. I like the slice-of-life moments that let us experience and learn the characters, which in turn help the characters learn about each other.
I never read the original, and I only just found out about MONARCH, but with them being the ones creating the transmutants I have suspicions. There are no revolutionaries. They are transmutants that MONARCH controls and sends out so they can establish more control, get more subjects to change and grow in power. Just a suspicion but wouldn't surprise me if it was the case. I'd be more surprised if the Revolutionaries were a group separate from MONARCH. What would be their reasoning for attacking innocent people then? It wouldn't make sense to me.