Adagio Dazzle has a chance meeting and a passionate night with an eccentric man named Buck, and to her absolute horror, she begins to fall in love with him.
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I'm enjoying this story but the Randomly capitalized Words are giving me A Headache.
Seriously, man. I keep having to stop and wonder if I missed a period or something. You want emphasis? Use italics. And even then, consider doing it more sparingly. It's like, the only big flaw in this story . . . and not the kind that enhances beauty, I'm afraid.
que extraño, este parrafo seria algo con lo que me auto describiria, literalmente, si me parece interesante, lo hago y sigo haciendo, si me parece aburrido, que se vaya a la mierda
10951505 To be fair, when you write a self-insert to the degree this author has, you tend to subconsciously write for yourself. Still, it is a rutt that should be worked through, certainly.
Also...
...Derek ne mera ketreta na rera.