Cicada and Junebug
written by CicadaChangeling
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A nice story, feels a bit fragmented but I'd love to read more.
10886520
Fragmented how? It is a partial rewrite of a speedwriting entry, so I can understand why it might be, but I'd like to learn where I made mistakes so I can fix them/avoid making them in the future.
10886559
I wouldn't say it's a mistake really. It's how the story is built. It runs on two separate timelines, what's happening right now, and flashbacks to explain it. I'd love to see where you're going with this. How did they end up being pen friends, why they decided to meet and more.
10886771
Thanks! I'm definitely going to be working on that. Right now I'm trying to think of which kind of chapter I'm going to work on next, but I definitely will have all that explored by the end.