Nocturnal Bats and Green-Eyed Angels
written by Golden Fang Ryu Shenron
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Yes! I waited so long for this chapter and it was totally worth it. That was so intense! Truth, I was a little worried when Nocturnus passed out.
I must say, for being their first time both they were quite skilled. Can't wait for more!
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I am deeply sorry for the wait I made you go through. You have no idea how much outside stuff I had to deal with before getting to this. At some point, I pretty much had to rewrite nearly the entire thing because I felt I was making the chapter too long and wordy...god that was a horrible time for me. In any case, I'm glad to have gotten it out at last! Writer's block is a bitch!
Indeed it was. I did my very best to not extend it anywhere near as long as I did last time and... looks like it paid off! Clopfic skills are improving little by little!
In truth, and yeah! I did make it look worrying for Nocturnus after he nearly got his skull split open by Mokata throwing that shower brush at him. In her defense though, she did get caught off guard by Nocturnus suddenly just barging in there after hearing her scream and fall. Plus, with the...exposing position she was in... her reaction was sort of expected.
I may have made them look a bit too skilled to be honest. Since they were both virgins before they decided to take that step. Still, some people can find something they're just naturally good at. Even if it is something they're doing for the first time.
More is indeed coming! Just two more chapters left before I head on over to work on the Sequels!
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Yesss! I can't wait for the two more chapters and you're right, your clopfic skills have definitely improved from the previous version of the story.
I'm super happy that you went over your writer's block.
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. I guess I just needed some inspiration from outside sources.
Yeah... I think this is the longest I've ever went on it