Antithesis a young Earth pony is trying to find his way growing up, follow him as he goes to school, learns skills and makes life long friends that will help him on his way.
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Howdy! figured I'd pop over and give my 2 cents for the story, so here we go!
I like the idea for there being a farmer colt who's life seems to be on the outside of the Elements of harmony storyline. It allows you to build on Equestria itself as a whole, rather than using something already done. Very creative on your part.
Although the first chapter or two seemed to paint the main foals personalities as simple, you built more on them in chapters three to five. I found my self relating to Astra, personally. (he's my favorite)
The structure of Antithesis's (cool name btw) home life is heartwarming and reminds me of family of my own. Its rare for people to make a OC pony with a decent OC family, but you hit that part on the head.
Overall rating so far: 7/10. I'm a fan of what your doing so far, and can't wait for more. Some scenes in the last chapter, like the store conflict scene, seemd a tad forced. But other than that, this is a great story!
*Sorry for the long comment! just had a lot to say.
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So Antithesis is my first attempt at a cohesive story.
I really wanted to practice with these characters before I get to the next part of the series. I'm growing along with these characters as I write them.
As for the conflict, I get what your saying I'll work on it.
Yes I didn't want to have a story that's focus was the main six, infact expanding on life outside the hustle and bustle of the show. Glad you picked that up!
Thanks for the feedback.