I'm really liking this story. I hope Meliodas and Zeldris can get along with the Elements.

“Princesses.” A guard mare came up to them and bowed, “NEWS directly from ponyville.”

“Speak my subject.” Luna said

“There has been a murder in ponyville, the first murder in equestria for nearly 500 years.”

“How many are dead?” Celestia asked

“1 mare reduced to ash, and 3 more ARE wounded, all of which were found unconscious in a BANK they robbed.”

“Thank you for bringing this to our attention, return to your post.” Celestia said, dismissing the guard, “Luna, it pains me to no end to say this, but we are facing gods as our opponents. We can't just solve this problem just by blindly throwing the elements of harmony at them, but if the elements don't work on them, THEN equestria is doomed."

Besides some minor mistakes I have seen to help you fix this.

This entire part definitely infuriates me. Mainly at Celestia and Luna. Aren't they forgetting that those Mares that were killed/heavily injured are CRIMINALS!!!!

Robbing a Bank, and not to mention the worst part of having to ALMOST Killing Pinkie Pie ( ONE of the most important Ponies for Equestria's Protection.), and the poor Mrs. Cake's Foals in the fire?!

But luckily, Meliodas and Zeldris save their lives, and even rebuild the bakery. But sadly, EVEN after all of that happening. Celestia and Luna somehow ignore that important part. And only FRICKIN care about the CRIMINAL Mares Lives???!!!

Wow! They are definitely SUPER Racist/Xenophobic, probably Sexist, and SO Selfish to care for their "precious" Little Ponies. Rather than seeing the bigger picture. 🙄

IF the Two Demon Demi-God Brothers found a Sex Slaving Trafficking Ring. And then save the poor Slaves, and TORTURING/KILLING the Heartless Slavers.

BUT, when Celestia and Luna show up. That they were angry at the Brothers for killing the Slavers. RATHER than not praising them for saving the slaves, and getting rid of the Heartless Flith ( The Slavers ) from this earth.

I would really want the Two Brothers be SUPER Pissed at them, and just say "F*** It!". By BEATING and ALMOST KILLING the absolute Shit out of those "Princesses" Dumbass IDIOTS!!!!!!

Maybe BREAKING/RIPPING their Horns and Wings off for good measure.

Consequences over their Death be DAMN!!!!!!

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Thx for the spell check, so now I will match your rant with my own mini rant:

First of all, The guard did not report on the burning bakery because, for ponies, it is impossible to reverse time in such a way that only a specific part of the land has had its time reversed.
Secondly, If Celestia and Luna had heard about the bakery burning down, whether it was true or not, they would've made sure that pinkie pie was okay along with the cake family.
And thirdly, I think I am doing a good job about painting them in a evil light so far, don't you think so.

P.s. your rant gave me a good Idea to include something in the upcoming chapters.
P.P.s The criminals will get the fair share of punishment in between chapter

Hey this is really good I hope to see more chapters soon