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10638734 Man I know how to do basic tasks on the internet lol. I just don't go through the comments a lot, I merely post the story for those who might enjoy it. What do you mean by a dark tag though? I mean, this story isn't really a grimdark or anything. Weird and improbable, yeah, but dark..?
….But for some reason you're feeling freer than ever.
Freer?
And since the day felt long, you took the time to tidy up the bedroom, as well as the rest of the house: Got rid of all the broken glass, cleaned the few bloodstains from the ground and replaced all the dirty bed sheets… also, prepared your pillow on the couch because that's where you're obviously sleeping.
That’s where you should have slept in the first place.
Now you can even see the opening code. ...It's: "369 / ♥"
What does that mean?
“... I know things between us didn't turn out the best way. Or the way I hoped they would. ..It was kind of foolish of me to think so, when I look back. I know I've hurt and humiliated you in many ways,. even enjoyed it sometimes... I just want you to know I'm sorry."
But, why now?
"A few,... believe it or not, there are those who feel it was wrong to take over Earth. I just had to find them and... I think I understand why they might be right."
Why?
".....Can I have a goodbye kiss? One you'd actually give willingly... I always wanted it, but,. I understand I never really deserved it."
A kiss that is...
Is he saying that or her?
The humans from the forest supposedly don't know they're occasionally being "helped" and they might think you're suspicious if you arrived with a pony by your side. So after thanking him and saying goodbye, you travel the last hour by foot.
Why not tell them?
"Brother, you're so far the saddest case we've got here." he chuckles, patting your shoulder "My name's Peter, come with me."
What are the others?
You're very aware the memories are tinted in pink now, because you constantly fought with her through those days. But it’s making you smile nonetheless.
Why pink?
"Say bye to others. Tell them I wish them the best and I appreciate all of you taking me in. But this isn't where I belong." you give him a gleeful smile before turning around.
Did his English change over time?
"I do, because..." she smiles excitedly, taking a deep breath,.. but then she hugs you again instead: "..nevermind, I'll tell you everything later. Now I'm just so happy to have you back."
What was she going to say?
And she's gone again, before you get to realize what exactly is going on. Leaving you there, chewing on the 4d cupcake.
4d?
"....Twilight was upset about me, leaving?" you glance at Rainbow Dash after swallowing the sweet pastry.
"...I may have told ponies you simply ran away,... I mean, I couldn't tell them I set you free, plus I thought I'd never see you again. So yeah, Twilight was pretty angry at you."
You reply to comments by moving your mouse over to the right hand side of the comment you want to reply to and clicking on the >> that appears. Why isn't there a dark tag?
10638734
Man I know how to do basic tasks on the internet lol. I just don't go through the comments a lot, I merely post the story for those who might enjoy it.
What do you mean by a dark tag though? I mean, this story isn't really a grimdark or anything. Weird and improbable, yeah, but dark..?
Freer?
That’s where you should have slept in the first place.
What does that mean?
But, why now?
Why?
Is he saying that or her?
Why not tell them?
What are the others?
Why pink?
Did his English change over time?
What was she going to say?
4d?
Why not?
This is good. I was worried Anon was going to become a mindless slave with all the what seemed like foreshadowing earlier on. Epic.
Ah yes, stockholm syndrome