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Huh... I kind of feel bad for Steelhorn, that's a pretty way bad way to go.
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This was my second favourite chapter to plan out. I knew from the beginning I wanted Steelhorn to die in exactly this way. Some of the other ways I planned for was Jericho chasing him down and knocking him off the cliff or having him carry Celestia and Luna over the mountain, and Celestia pushes him off the side. In this scenario, she'd be tied up, and Luna would have to choose. She'd save her sister, obviously, but in the end, this is the one I chose.
Directed feedback request: How did you feel about Steelhorn, as a character?
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He was... pretty interesting.
While I don't think forcefully taking over Equestria to get the army he needed was the right way to go, at least it wasn't going to be a permanent takeover, and his reasoning for needing the army made sense
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I was trying for a benevolent, yet brutish idea. He genuinely loves his subjects, and would do anything to keep them safe. Even horrible, terrible things. I wanted him to be villified, but definitely not evil. Humanize him, you might say. I wanted readers to either love him, hate him, or both. To definitely feel something when he was gone. What they feel was up to them, but that's supposed to be an emotional event. Not how he went, but what he was doing when he went.
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Yeah, I'd say you succeeded in that regard.