Admittedly the premise is executed a bit strangely (I'm with Rainbow a bit here in feeling confused about how things went down) and it is a bit too gratuitous with the descriptions of what's happening with Lux (assuming she is actually pretty young). That aside the blowjob scene was outstanding, especially the climax with Rainbow relating to what it would be like for Twilight based on her own experience.

What's Twilight's motivation here?Why did Dash need to see her being a whore?Just go with"Dash, the rumors are not true"or"It's my fucking business"or something like this.I feel like you are the master at degrading ponies lol

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Thank you! I felt pretty proud about the BJ myself.

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In my head, Twilight was realizing she was not getting through to Dash. Twilight thought she was clear in her desire for Dash to drop it, but Twilight also knew Dash is extremely stubborn and would likely keep getting into trouble unless Twilight did something to reset her world view.

And, woof. What a thing to master in, huh?

Finished the quintology and it was a massive emotional experience. It delivers extremely efficient prose that shows me all the emotions of the characters involved.

I first believed it was a psychological thriller, with an evolving storyline describing conflicts to be solved. Now I know its main focus is porn and the sex isn't there as as a narrative device.

It's still one of the most gripping stories I've read on this site, but I know I shouldn't write long rambling opinions so I'll stop here.

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I care! Thanks!

The window’s unlocked. I’ll open the door if you insist.

This is like Twilight's one redeeming line in the whole series.

I kinda like just how vicious damn near everyone in this universe is.