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There's something fascinating about how this is written. The descriptuons are quite basic, but it gives the work a sort of unembellished, documentary-style flair.
Enjoying this so far, good work
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A piece of advice I was given five years ago reads as follows: If it isn't important to the story or interesting in its own right, skip it. In the explanation, the commenter said to me that if you describe a scene too well, you leave nothing to the reader's imagination, and they're insulted. Describe too little, and you place all of the work on their shoulders. It's also a sign of a poor writer if you use too many descriptors in an effort to puff up your word count.
Now, I could have told this entire story in one sentence if I wanted to be very brief. In fact, when I was given the originalmoutline for this story, it was exactly one sentence long. If you would like to know what that sentence is, I direct you to the short description of the story.
I'm really enjoying this story!