10498584 Yes, my editor has told me of my liking to repeat details, usually from different perspectives. I typically try to do this to demonstrate how certain characters might see certain things, be they environments, dialogue, or even other characters themselves, but he (my editor) does let me know when I go a bit overboard, heh. It's just my style, and I do try an keep such things to a minimum for clarity sake.
Thank you for the feedback, as I encourage people to give. I do hope that, besides for my (often) use of strange prose and structure, you are enjoying the story so far!
So far I like this story so nice and simple
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I agree nice and simple. But I do have a question or two
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Yes, my editor has told me of my liking to repeat details, usually from different perspectives. I typically try to do this to demonstrate how certain characters might see certain things, be they environments, dialogue, or even other characters themselves, but he (my editor) does let me know when I go a bit overboard, heh. It's just my style, and I do try an keep such things to a minimum for clarity sake.
Thank you for the feedback, as I encourage people to give. I do hope that, besides for my (often) use of strange prose and structure, you are enjoying the story so far!