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Ooooooooh, boy! Grogar's on the move!! I can honestly say that I didn't see that coming! Especially in New Unicornia. Granted, I can kinda understand the reasons why they took such drastic steps. They were losing the war badly, resorting to scorched earth tactics to spite their conquerors, whilst their beloved leader descended ever deeper into unnatural madness. Finally, while I understand the likely reasons why he wants the alicorns' hearts at Mount Everhoof, I am far from surprised that Blood Diamond has essentially become his flunkie. Such a bloodthirsty and psychopathic leader left in charge of the remainder of the government will ensure that the maximum amount of bloodshed will occur after all. Man, what an overall ominous transitory chapter!
My only complaint is that you, like quite a few others, did that weird text thing where you mixed up that symbols in an effort to make his 'voice' and presence seem more ominous. But, honestly, all it did was break the immersion as I struggled to even read LETTERS in that mess! Please, I beseech you! Don't do that again.
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Actually I haven't read the story yet. That was just what I got from reading the synopsis. If you see a comment from me somewhere on here, you should assume that I haven't read the story yet.
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I tend to assume when someone comments on my stories that they've read at least a chapter or 2.
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If you highlight the sentences that I used the Zalgo generator on you can read the words without the bizarre symbols. I used the Zalgo generator to give his words a much more unnatural feel, like something that shouldn't be.
It could have been much worse, I could have used comic sans.
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I have never even heard of the Zal-whatever before, so I haven't got the faintest clue to how to use it. But I digress, if you wanna use it, who am I to argue?
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It's a text generator that gives you that weird glitchy looking text. You just type in words, it automatically creates the text, you just have to copy and paste.