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Whooooo! That was awesome! Nice to see that you took my suggestions so well. I really like that little change you made with the fruit. Exploding if it was bitten into? Nice, and suitably dark for the era. Seeing the various stages of marines induction and the NEE just doing basic recruiting and training was certainly very nice. That scene with the girls and Celestia was a rather good bonding moment for them. And that was some nice world-building you added in with the Saddle Arabians not being able to get cutie marks.
But now the real fun begins!! While Cozy Glow's escape is basically inevitable, I wonder where she'll go next? Eh, something to worry about later. We've got a war to fight now!!