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nice work.
So, I've been loving this story a lot, because it's done a lot of great things. I especially adore the way that pronouns were not shifted just because anatomy shifted; I've never seen a story willing to respect gender identities like that, and it made things far more enjoyable as a result.
I did want to point out something I noticed in this chapter though. Early on you mention Twi changing back to alicorn form:
But then two instances later you reference her still being human and then changing back from human to alicorn:
Just thought I'd point that out.
Did I miss something or did Twilight randomly turn back into a human part way through?
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Seconding this note: Twilight gets the negation die but then shifts human again before her turn's over, then alicorn again at the 'end' of the game. Maybe the cleanest edit would be to just change her die result to the sensitivity face?
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Whoops! Talk about a huge continuity error. Thanks for calling that out. This chapter might have been rushed out the door a little bit.
I have a feeling this game will become their monthly ritual.
Oh my. Seems the game isn't quite over. Though it has gotten some confessions out finally. Looking forward to the endgame.
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Sequel?
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Nope, but don't worry. This story isn't over yet, and I don't expect it to be for a good while.
I'm really looking forward to future updates with regards to this gender exploration
Funny, so someone get a permanent gender change than via Discord game? That sure would interesst many.