Notes from the pre-readers;

Melody recalled both Applejack’s and Coloratura’sColuraturas past experiences-

Silvax: Replace: “Coluraturas” with “Coloratura’s”

Me: What the fluff am I spelling?! >.>

Seriously? He still hasn’t gotten back to me on what I’ve been spelling ^^’ >.>

-it was all about her; *Harmony Orchard!

Silvax: So this is the part where you changed her name from Harmony to Melody?

Me: yes... do carch and correct -/-

So, original the two leads were named Harmony & PJ (cause, AJ (my SFW name) P... even for this being shameless self-insert, I had always planed to change it. Although I ended up changing Harmony to Melody after that scene where, now West, refers to her friends as the Elements. You know, of harmony? Although as I wrote this I recall Octavia’s last name is Melody, but at this point I’m just going to stick with Melody. I like it. Although please point out if you see the names Harmony or Pj please

”Or,” Pinkie smirked, “You forgot what it was like with Twilight when we were *Dainty Pleasures?”

Silvax: From the original fic the name was Dainty Pleasure

Me: Ah ^^’ I is a lazy derp 9.6

I think now that he was just pointing this fact out. But another fun fact, he was also the one who commissioned the cover art for that story before this series existed

And that will do it for this round. Hope you enjoy, and the more pre-readers I have on a project, the better