An overdose of her sister's secret pills sends Sweetie Belle back for her next year of University with a much fuller figure, and an unexpected encounter.
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Quick tip: people generally react better to numbers below one-hundred written out instead of, well, just numbers. They're not that much longer; it makes your story come across as lazy if you don't, as if you're not ready to put in the effort to type three letters (six) over one (6).
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I also think using the numerals interrupt the flow of prose.