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The fiction story is pretty good. Although, punctuations is what making this story look bad. I started to noticed it in a few chapters and then some. I give this at least a 6.5/10.
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Thanks for the comment and the read. I'll try to be better about editing but, in all honesty, I absolutely hate it.
Gladly accept a 6.5. I do hope you will continue to read. The story is building towards something and it's probably not what you think. Thanks again!
Heheheheheheh... You've redeemed yourself for now...
But Glow should REALLY know the difference between stupidity and a better actor than herself.
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You weren't as dumbly painted as you thought. Always a step ahead. Always. Even in the later years.
Thanks for reading and the comments. I'm as pleased as pop. I hope the rest of the story is to your liking.
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Heheheh... I told you. Cozy should know the difference between stupidity and a better actor than herself.
Simple.
Trust me, the truth is a lot weirder than you might think.
Even when she is undeniably evil, Pinkie is still Pinkie.
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Lol. So that was the big difference between my pinkamena and dobermans, who did mfc: vengeance. He liked her still upbeat and goofy whereas I liked her more dark. However, there is a reason why pinkamena in mfc:r and mfc are different in personality.