[Displaced fic]I was sitting at home waiting out this state lock down over the corona virus when a mysterious package arrived at my door. Upon opening it I found a can of fox spray before I blacked out. Now I'm in Equestria and caring for two foals.
I like the idea and the character. A few questions about "her" situation would have to be answered soom. First would be checking the equipment. Does the clip slowely regenerate new bullets, does the spray refill itself? If not how to get more ammunition should be one of her primary concerns. Other than that would be exploration as to what the effects of her new Alicorn magic will be. Immortality most likely but what about boosted strength, cloudwalking and something more active?
I am looking forward to seeing modern Equestria react to her (I assmume she will make it that long and that she will somehow skip the part between the founding of Equestria and the return of Luna. But in Alt. Uni anything is possible).
Great job with the rewrite and thanks for not letting this story die it is a really interesting story and one of the few MLP fics that has zootopia in it
This is still a sad and heart touching beginning with a awesome start. I still hope in the future Nick not only comes to help her but also love her. I'm happy it still lives.
It's a bright and sunny morning in a village with no name in the middle of a valley with no name, the birds with no name in the nearby forest with no name are singing their songs with no name, while the brook with no name bubbles along and the animals with no name of the forest which is still with no name add their own part to the music of the woods with no name.
I felt there wasn't enough no name in it, so I made everything in this sentence even less named.
Keep it up man thanks for not dropping this story I really like it !!!
Very good. Nice that this story continues.
I like the idea and the character.
A few questions about "her" situation would have to be answered soom. First would be checking the equipment. Does the clip slowely regenerate new bullets, does the spray refill itself? If not how to get more ammunition should be one of her primary concerns.
Other than that would be exploration as to what the effects of her new Alicorn magic will be. Immortality most likely but what about boosted strength, cloudwalking and something more active?
I am looking forward to seeing modern Equestria react to her (I assmume she will make it that long and that she will somehow skip the part between the founding of Equestria and the return of Luna. But in Alt. Uni anything is possible).
Wonderful chapter. Can't wait to read more!
Great job with the rewrite and thanks for not letting this story die it is a really interesting story and one of the few MLP fics that has zootopia in it
Seems legit to me.
Good news to hear this story would continue.
This is still a sad and heart touching beginning with a awesome start. I still hope in the future Nick not only comes to help her but also love her. I'm happy it still lives.
It's great that you kept the story going ^^
It interested me when you first started and it continues to interest me ^^
Just finished reading this and I gotta say I really like it, rewrite is pretty good so far, and I agree with Epyrios
I felt there wasn't enough no name in it, so I made everything in this sentence even less named.