The first thing Twilight felt upon waking was pleasure - a vibrating rod stuck deep into her slit, as two more - moist with some liquid - buzzed hard against her nipples. She was laying on her back in what felt like a water-bed coated in a sticky fluid, her limbs stretched out spread-eagle - even her wings were spread, as the mare uttered a loud moan and panted, opening her eyes before her breath caught in her throat and she jolted.

...I'll admit I skipped the first chapter, but maybe slow things down?

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Heh, didn't quite consider how abrupt a start that may be if the first chapter was skipped. Oops. Good other than that, I hope.

Alright, this looks promising. Tracking for now.