10115073 Yeah I deleted it out of anger because if you can't see that he is putting on an act for the others to show he is fine, you need to start reading a bit deeper because I am writing the character's personality in with the actions he makes. I can't believe that I was doing that until I read back through my story to look for something specific I said earlier for the next chapter, by the way I don't plan what I write in advance. I am just a writer that allows his brain to write what it wants within certain boundaries for each chapter.
10115238 I'm sure you're aware that deleting someone's comment because you disagree or it bothers you whether the common is good bad or indifferent, is a bad idea, because it sets a precedent in your comment section and for you're story.
10116408 I appreciate that. It seems you've learned from your mistake and broken the cycle in your mind. You can now take criticism, with a grain of salt whether it be good bad or indifferent. Embrace it and make your stories better.
I was planning on making this another bad ass chapter, but my brain had other ideas. Hope you enjoy the twists and wtf moments, try not to die laughing or break an ankle trudging through this chapter riddled with gopher holes! 🤣
Hmmm it’s going good so far but I do hope he gets a brake after this fight to to allow some character development between our MC and everyone else for if it’s just fight after fight it can and tends to get boring so I do hope to see a grace period so to say to allow some character development between everyone to happen. Can’t wait to see more.
Can't help but wonder or think if the reactions of loss from the mane six are following the "hysterical woman" or "prone to cry" tropes a little too much. Pinkie going into denial and crying at the loss I could see, the screaming/wailing parts from AJ, pinkie and RD though...
Yes I am aware of to each their own method of reacting to loss but when you read and notice a repeated pattern, two is expected but three is a crowd.
Oh hey my comment was deleted, I wonder why.
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Yeah I deleted it out of anger because if you can't see that he is putting on an act for the others to show he is fine, you need to start reading a bit deeper because I am writing the character's personality in with the actions he makes. I can't believe that I was doing that until I read back through my story to look for something specific I said earlier for the next chapter, by the way I don't plan what I write in advance. I am just a writer that allows his brain to write what it wants within certain boundaries for each chapter.
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I'm sure you're aware that deleting someone's comment because you disagree or it bothers you whether the common is good bad or indifferent, is a bad idea, because it sets a precedent in your comment section and for you're story.
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I apologize for deleting your comment.
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Thanks for catching that screwup, let me know if you find anything else that conflicts with what is written so far, or is just incorrect.
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I appreciate that. It seems you've learned from your mistake and broken the cycle in your mind. You can now take criticism, with a grain of salt whether it be good bad or indifferent. Embrace it and make your stories better.
I was planning on making this another bad ass chapter, but my brain had other ideas. Hope you enjoy the twists and wtf moments, try not to die laughing or break an ankle trudging through this chapter riddled with gopher holes! 🤣
Hmmm it’s going good so far but I do hope he gets a brake after this fight to to allow some character development between our MC and everyone else for if it’s just fight after fight it can and tends to get boring so I do hope to see a grace period so to say to allow some character development between everyone to happen. Can’t wait to see more.
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lol don't worry, he will get a break alright...just wait till I put in the last few paragraphs. This next chapter will be done within a day.
10119610 Look forward to it.
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Bayott needs to be careful or he may find mares seeking his affection (Thoguh Mara would LOVE some grandkids)
Also: Stop reminding me that I havnt finished my Skyrim run yet!
I like how the quest is called "Behold Shadowmere." As if it's gracing you with it's presence and not the other way around.
Can't help but wonder or think if the reactions of loss from the mane six are following the "hysterical woman" or "prone to cry" tropes a little too much. Pinkie going into denial and crying at the loss I could see, the screaming/wailing parts from AJ, pinkie and RD though...
Yes I am aware of to each their own method of reacting to loss but when you read and notice a repeated pattern, two is expected but three is a crowd.