i think he should take the punishment then explain that this is the gods fault they set a man with his history down a path to save the mortal world once more. he will do anything to do so pay any price and do anything to complete his quest and they know him
The moment they set him on this path every action he takes is there fault and more importantly if they can punish him WTF are they not punishing the fucking EATER OF WORLDS
The gods lack of action if at fault, the gods creation is at fault and if they leave the inhabitants of a world to deal with its problem then they cant complain about how it is done
the only job he has is to save this world no other no matter how much damage he dose to other worlds that not his job again the gods are wrong here
10121192 I agree with this assessment and hope ya incorporate it somehow into the story 10121453 but other then that very good so far and can’t wait for more.
Nahagliiv chuckles and holds her head a little higher then says, "What is your name, Dovahkiin? Do you know what ever became of Paarthurnax? He is my uncle and I miss him greatly, is he still alive or did you kill him too? Who says the male has the option to just walk away after challenging a female Dovah. You are as the humans would say, ' up shit creek without a paddle ', you are at my mercy now and shall await my response to your challenge. You seem to have a few tales to tell, so I shall choose you as my new mate. If you don't like the idea of being my partner, tough shit because I made my choice and you are stuck with it. I look forward to our life together and... ' there goes your canoe '. If you have any requests to make, I shall listen to them and follow if they are within reason." She then drops her head down a little bit and waits for his reply.
substituted prisoners with empty cells to work better and make sense.
Did Bayott know that using the shout was bad and I missed it? If not, hope Mara feels bad about herself later.
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nope, he had no Idea that it was bad. Wait and see... Wait and see...
Honestly I'm less than a quarter of reading this chapter, and it just sounds like rambling. Slow down, take a breath.
i think he should take the punishment then explain that this is the gods fault they set a man with his history down a path to save the mortal world once more. he will do anything to do so pay any price and do anything to complete his quest and they know him
The moment they set him on this path every action he takes is there fault and more importantly if they can punish him WTF are they not punishing the fucking EATER OF WORLDS
The gods lack of action if at fault, the gods creation is at fault and if they leave the inhabitants of a world to deal with its problem then they cant complain about how it is done
the only job he has is to save this world no other no matter how much damage he dose to other worlds that not his job again the gods are wrong here
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thanks for the update, didn't know that they were family. got it fixed
10121192 I agree with this assessment and hope ya incorporate it somehow into the story 10121453 but other then that very good so far and can’t wait for more.
Sorry all, I am going to change that part about his children being able to shout, to have a chance to be able to inherit the ability.
I am also changing up the description of Mara to make better sense in future chapters to a misty rose pink and silver.
Does Dragonbane wait for it's rightful bearer once again in the ruins of Sky Haven Temple? Let us find out together my faithful companions.
poor guy
She could have just taken the knowledge of that shout away from him.
It would be a worse punishment than scars and a story.