Cadance and Shining Armor finally get a vacation!
I am definitely liking where this is going! I did spot one error though:
...and while her coat remained pink, her long hair turned pink, making her the opposite of Gleamings pink mane and white coat.
I believe you meant to say "her long hair turned white".
It wouldn't surprise me, if Gleaming wants to explore her new body a bit more, then just with Cadence and finds herself a nice Stallion.Of course they are careless and she ends up Pregnant at the end.
Guessing Gleaming getting pregnant is a forgone conclusion as of "You're a girl forever if it happens".
I like the first chapter very well. I hope to continue to follow!
Well, I'm intrigued. But I must say, I see a wrench getting thrown in the works.
... or a foal in an oven.
I'm loving this so far can't wait to see what happens next.
I am definitely liking where this is going! I did spot one error though:
I believe you meant to say "her long hair turned white".
It wouldn't surprise me, if Gleaming wants to explore her new body a bit more, then just with Cadence and finds herself a nice Stallion.
Of course they are careless and she ends up Pregnant at the end.
Guessing Gleaming getting pregnant is a forgone conclusion as of "You're a girl forever if it happens".
I like the first chapter very well. I hope to continue to follow!
Well, I'm intrigued. But I must say, I see a wrench getting thrown in the works.
... or a foal in an oven.
I'm loving this so far can't wait to see what happens next.