Not that I'm telling you how to write your stories, but are you sure using Frostbite is a good idea? Because in your Equestria Girls stories, Frostbite is the boyfriend of Fluttershy, yet in this story (which I understand isn't related to the other stories), Frostbite has feelings for Applejack. You should probably clarify that this Frostbite isn't the same one from your mainstream stories.
The caller must be Applejack.
Great chapter!
Not that I'm telling you how to write your stories, but are you sure using Frostbite is a good idea? Because in your Equestria Girls stories, Frostbite is the boyfriend of Fluttershy, yet in this story (which I understand isn't related to the other stories), Frostbite has feelings for Applejack. You should probably clarify that this Frostbite isn't the same one from your mainstream stories.
Thanks man, I love the story so far. Can't wait to see the next chapter
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Yes, this is a different Frostbite.
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Hope you're feeling bro, stay strong!
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Thanks Evan
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No problem!
Awesome chapter! Hope to read the next one.