Glad I was able to help you with this.

9997419
Same here^^

9997420
And glad I was able to introduce a fellow gundam fan the show this story is based off of.

Seems a little rushed at the start of the story. Like maybe give it a little more length and depth into how the war occurred. And maybe also how Spike's previous life was before it all happened.

Also the later parts of the chapter would probably be a good idea to save for a second or third chapter to give the characters some chance to flesh out.

Anyways, I hope this could help your story.

10005061
I have a plan don't worry, there will be reason. And thanks for the criticism.

Love that story

10016810
Thank you^^

So far so good. As someone who grew up on G Gundam, as it was my first gundam series, I have high expectations on how this can turn out.
Good luck.

10116129
Thanks.