Climbing back into bed, she used her magic to close the widow and pulled the covers over herself. Finding a comfortable position, she felt Inset cuddle up against her side. "It's just for warmth, I'm sure..." the mare whispered, finding herself tense as the prospect of sleeping next to something that could drain her, or worse, cocoon her.
Small mistake I found. I really like this so far. Reminds me a bit of Changeling Courtship Rituals, with the "misunderstanding" of Twilight "submitting" to Instar.
Small mistake I found.
I really like this so far. Reminds me a bit of Changeling Courtship Rituals, with the "misunderstanding" of Twilight "submitting" to Instar.
Nice story, I can't wait to see how it develop :)
There are a few spelling mistakes, but I am a bad reader and can't really tell you where.
Only at the end of this chapter, you spell Instar as Inset.
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Thanks! Fixed it :3
Yes, better close her before her insides spill everywhere.