Is technically buying a cursed artifact (That you didn't know was cursed) a bad thing? Well, Evan is ambivalent about it. He is in Equestria, in a pickle, and under... interesting (naughty) conditions to keep on living. Could be worse?
Holy fuck. It is done. Should've been faster, but meh. RL is a bitch, let's leave it at that.
Anyway: If you guys vote for one of the choices, and want to suggest your own name, if it is a gal guard or a guy guard, or even the family composition (Fuck it, why not?), do mention your voting choice in the comment (Don't try to cheat the Railgunner! I will fuck you up from Mars, I swear!). Remember that if I like the choice and pick it, you get mentioned in the credits section (for good or ill *Evil laugh button needed*).
Have a good day everyone. (Or night, 'cos it is nearly two in the morning and I am dying)
Mare bat who needs to be broken into realizing her destiny is nothing but a cockslave because she's utterly failed at empathy or understanding the value of different species her entire life
with a cute husband who didn't get much choice in their relationship and now feels trapped by it, a rebellious teenage son who hasn't gotten the parenting he deserved so is starting to act out, and a precocious little filly who's worried by her family never seeming happy
Plz tell me we're going to eventually have slutty subby spike. Having cucked shining and subby fat bottumed (male and young) spike is super enticeing. Either way this story is watched.
My personal vote is for the unicorn. I like batponies and all, but I do want to see a bit less hostility. Though she's unsure of how/if magic will effect Evan, I suspect it's also something that she'd want to figure out so she can better plan how to deal with him going forward.
Maybe a MILF of a unicorn guard mare, perhaps with a younger teen daughter mare. Maybe she's a bit frustrated or tired of the same ol' routine day in and out, and is secretly happy to have the chance to prove she can do more by guarding/watching Evan. Could lead to new experiences in the future - though maybe not quite how she thinks!
Well people, I am back for today. Since yesterday my last check made it look like it was very close I allowed the voting to go over through the night to see what it was going to happen and... Holy fuck. Thestrals lost by a (small) landslide. I mean, even counting the ones here as if you guys hadn't voted in the poll, there is still 5 points of difference. That is quite a lot more than I thought there would be after yesterday (I mean, I thought I'd see one or two points of difference at best).
So yeah, Unicorn it is. I'll get to it right away and (hopefully) I won't make you guys wait half afucking month this time. Sorry Ex! The bat family will have to wait.
See you guys soon.
(Also, no one voted for pegasi. You fuken racists !)
9929406 I voted for option 6. If the one with Changeling win Evan could tumble upon the guard and find out that he is a Changeling in disguise. Evan could use his Hypnotic Touch (while using his knowledge of Queen Chryalis that he watch crom the show) on the Changeling to convince him to spy on both Princess Celestia and Queen Chryalis as his double agent and giving Evan info that might be useful to him later on. At first Evan doesn't let Princess Cadance know about his Changeling double agent but he will eventually reveal it to her when the time is right. And it's seem that Evan need to be on a enough high level to be able to impregnate powerful beings like Alicorns let just hope that Evan will be on a high enough level when he encounters powerful characters like Discord so he will able to impregnate them. And here some more questions that I forgot to ask before: Q1. Will Even's appearance will change over time into a cartoonish appearance that fit the cartoon world of MLP? Kinda like here (the third one at the bottom). Q2. Will Cosmos, Cpic2, Discord's crazy ex-girlfriend from the comic series will make appearance in this story? EDITED: And some more ideas for skills, abilities, Traits, etc: Chaotic Attraction/Chaotic Nature: This is a trait that the [player] can only gain it by doing it with a Draconequus. This trait will make draconequui find the [player] very attractive. And it also allows the [player] to resist the effects of chaos magic and reality warping magic. Paradox Immunity/Time Immunity: This ability can be gain after using the Time Travel ability for the first time. This ability allows the [player] to be immune to any time altering paradoxes that the [player] might cause (like if he accidentally kill his past self or something like but it won't effects the current one. So in theory the [player] can kill his past self then take his place) thus allowing paradoxes like the [player] being able to have sex with himself if he wants. And the ability also make the [player] Immune to any time manipulating spells.
9935664 Sadly, changelings will have to wait! Shame, ‘cos as soon as I thought about that idea I liked it, but hey, I find equally fun giving you guys a say in this all. Also, teeeechnically Evan could do it right now... If he is stupidly lucky/does it 24/7 for a couple of months. If you throw enough dice you'll get a perfect score sooner or later, eh? (Also, he could, I dunno, knock up Chrysalis far easier than most ponies, but that is because Changelings cheat ;), if you know what I mean)
Now, as for questions?
.-1: Aah... good ol' Karno... But Evan IS already a bit toony, but likely around the middle (3 or 4), as I pointed out in the first chapter (Not the intro). He still looks slightly 'realistic', but not overly so. To us it would look like a cartoon in the olden days, to the ponies it probably looks just different, less colorful and generally darker in a sense. It probably doesn't help when it comes to feeling safe around him, and probably makes him look rugged and the like.
.-2: Nnnnnno, sorry. Not because she wouldn't be interesting, but for other reasons that will be spoken about sooner or later. Not going to make spoilers here (I mean, beyond answering the question).
As such I will only tell you that the Time Paradox bit is basically built in when it comes to fucking up with time. The ones that made the M.O.C and all this had things well planned out, you know? (Fucking bullshit. I make it up as I go!) Don't pay attention to that one. Alternative selves are such assholes. In any case: Evan, once he can travel through time, will have certain limiters built in. But you’ll see, you’ll see. If I say more I spoil things (Though, still, thanks for chimming in. At some point I am bound to fuck up something, or something you bring up will catch my eye, I just know it. So I am grateful that you are giving pokes ^^)
9938174 Changelings would definitely be interesting to see. And having Evan get a chance to knock up queen bugbutt? Hell yes.
I do hope to see them sometime in the future should the story allow it. I just don't want to see him game over, so to speak. They'll definitely be challenging to overcome, and Chrysalis would no doubt be highly hostile towards him, even moreso than Celestia is currently being. She's not the most hospitable.
From what I can gather from the strawpoll, every body (22 people as of this comment) bitched out and chose the easy option. Interestingly, I find my self rather enjoying this fic. It reminds me of Universal Acceptance and it's sequel, which I thoroughly enjoyed as well. By the way, I noticed that a lot of the comments answering the Choose-your-own-adventure questions are adding in a lot of detail like who and what they think the protagonist should interact with and how that should go about. Is that how you want people to answer those questions, or would you rather they just choose one of the options listed and let you show the consequences of that path without inputting their own spins on how it should go? Just curious what your thoughts on that are.
9966276 I mean I picked what I thought was best.... I didnt want it to be easy, but I also didnt want it to be Fubar! Fubar means the story pretty much ends.... Atleast in my eyes.... So a nice middle ground between difficult but not death.
Well, shit. Hello people! It is A LOT late (Fuck spelling), but I am coming back. An accident and RL (more info in the next chapter when it comes) have made me step out for far longer than expected. Sorry about it. Still, it DID give me time to fiddle around with what I wanted to do, and it made me realize that I should take my time doing this because, in all honesty, I tried to rush things until life kicked me in the nuts. So I'll be back soon(ish)™ with good quality, though not much smut (yet). Rushing it up didn’t feel good, so the next two chapters won’t have almost (or no) porn.
Six onwards? Oh fuck. It GREATLY depends on you guys, but if you want to be perverts, we WILL be perverts
9966276 As I stated previously: If you give more details, and I like the idea, you get a fat slab of a mention for it. If I am asking for a species for a character to appear, and you MAKE a character profile (Seeing how I do things I'll be anal retentive about details, but you lose nothing if you try!) that I like? Then you also get said credits anytime the character gets into the action because, hey, technically speaking it is yours.
So yes, if you want to give details, ideas, etc, and I think they work. CREDITS! You guys deserve that much if you give me inspiration If you just want to vote? That is just as welcome ^^. The story won't be any good if you guys don't have interest, and voting is a very good way of showing it.
10074226 Hopefully the next chapter will be up this upcoming week! Since you probably have read the whole thing, you probably know why it took so long (Sorry once more!). Also: FUBAR wouldn't have meant things went to permanent shitcreek without a paddle, but it would've been... interesting so to speak. And hey! You should choose what you like first and foremost :3
Holy fuck. It is done. Should've been faster, but meh. RL is a bitch, let's leave it at that.
Anyway: If you guys vote for one of the choices, and want to suggest your own name, if it is a gal guard or a guy guard, or even the family composition (Fuck it, why not?), do mention your voting choice in the comment (Don't try to cheat the Railgunner! I will fuck you up from Mars, I swear!). Remember that if I like the choice and pick it, you get mentioned in the credits section (for good or ill *Evil laugh button needed*).
Have a good day everyone. (Or night, 'cos it is nearly two in the morning and I am dying)
Will this story have any m/f sex scenes, implied or otherwise, where the woman does most or all of the work?
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Likely in some, yush.
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Mare bat who needs to be broken into realizing her destiny is nothing but a cockslave because she's utterly failed at empathy or understanding the value of different species her entire life
with a cute husband who didn't get much choice in their relationship and now feels trapped by it, a rebellious teenage son who hasn't gotten the parenting he deserved so is starting to act out, and a precocious little filly who's worried by her family never seeming happy
Option 1 please :)
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https://www.strawpoll.me/18898947
I think the poll link is a bit hard to see in the chapter - everyone should make sure they don't miss it!
Plz tell me we're going to eventually have slutty subby spike. Having cucked shining and subby fat bottumed (male and young) spike is super enticeing. Either way this story is watched.
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Batboop! *Boop* You perverse little thing... But hey, thestral is wining for now with the votes in here (barely, surprisingly), so maybe!
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Made it more visible. I swear I changed the color to blue in the document before posting... Maybe I forgot? *Hides*
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Most likely yes. Was thinking Spike version Saurian to be honest, but we'll see.
My personal vote is for the unicorn. I like batponies and all, but I do want to see a bit less hostility. Though she's unsure of how/if magic will effect Evan, I suspect it's also something that she'd want to figure out so she can better plan how to deal with him going forward.
Maybe a MILF of a unicorn guard mare, perhaps with a younger teen daughter mare. Maybe she's a bit frustrated or tired of the same ol' routine day in and out, and is secretly happy to have the chance to prove she can do more by guarding/watching Evan. Could lead to new experiences in the future - though maybe not quite how she thinks!
...yeah I'm not good with stories
Well people, I am back for today. Since yesterday my last check made it look like it was very close I allowed the voting to go over through the night to see what it was going to happen and... Holy fuck. Thestrals lost by a (small) landslide. I mean, even counting the ones here as if you guys hadn't voted in the poll, there is still 5 points of difference. That is quite a lot more than I thought there would be after yesterday (I mean, I thought I'd see one or two points of difference at best).
So yeah, Unicorn it is. I'll get to it right away and (hopefully) I won't make you guys wait half afucking month this time. Sorry Ex! The bat family will have to wait.
See you guys soon.
(Also, no one voted for pegasi. You fuken racists !)
9929406
I voted for option 6. If the one with Changeling win Evan could tumble upon the guard and find out that he is a Changeling in disguise. Evan could use his Hypnotic Touch (while using his knowledge of Queen Chryalis that he watch crom the show) on the Changeling to convince him to spy on both Princess Celestia and Queen Chryalis as his double agent and giving Evan info that might be useful to him later on. At first Evan doesn't let Princess Cadance know about his Changeling double agent but he will eventually reveal it to her when the time is right.
And it's seem that Evan need to be on a enough high level to be able to impregnate powerful beings like Alicorns let just hope that Evan will be on a high enough level when he encounters powerful characters like Discord so he will able to impregnate them.
And here some more questions that I forgot to ask before:
Q1. Will Even's appearance will change over time into a cartoonish appearance that fit the cartoon world of MLP? Kinda like here (the third one at the bottom).
Q2. Will Cosmos, Cpic2, Discord's crazy ex-girlfriend from the comic series will make appearance in this story?
EDITED: And some more ideas for skills, abilities, Traits, etc:
Chaotic Attraction/Chaotic Nature: This is a trait that the [player] can only gain it by doing it with a Draconequus. This trait will make draconequui find the [player] very attractive. And it also allows the [player] to resist the effects of chaos magic and reality warping magic.
Paradox Immunity/Time Immunity: This ability can be gain after using the Time Travel ability for the first time. This ability allows the [player] to be immune to any time altering paradoxes that the [player] might cause (like if he accidentally kill his past self or something like but it won't effects the current one. So in theory the [player] can kill his past self then take his place) thus allowing paradoxes like the [player] being able to have sex with himself if he wants. And the ability also make the [player] Immune to any time manipulating spells.
9935664
Sadly, changelings will have to wait! Shame, ‘cos as soon as I thought about that idea I liked it, but hey, I find equally fun giving you guys a say in this all. Also, teeeechnically Evan could do it right now... If he is stupidly lucky/does it 24/7 for a couple of months. If you throw enough dice you'll get a perfect score sooner or later, eh? (Also, he could, I dunno, knock up Chrysalis far easier than most ponies, but that is because Changelings cheat ;), if you know what I mean)
Now, as for questions?
.-1: Aah... good ol' Karno... But Evan IS already a bit toony, but likely around the middle (3 or 4), as I pointed out in the first chapter (Not the intro). He still looks slightly 'realistic', but not overly so. To us it would look like a cartoon in the olden days, to the ponies it probably looks just different, less colorful and generally darker in a sense. It probably doesn't help when it comes to feeling safe around him, and probably makes him look rugged and the like.
.-2: Nnnnnno, sorry. Not because she wouldn't be interesting, but for other reasons that will be spoken about sooner or later. Not going to make spoilers here (I mean, beyond answering the question).
As such I will only tell you that the Time Paradox bit is basically built in when it comes to fucking up with time. The ones that made the M.O.C and all this had things well planned out, you know? (
Fucking bullshit. I make it up as I go!) Don't pay attention to that one. Alternative selves are such assholes. In any case: Evan, once he can travel through time, will have certain limiters built in. But you’ll see, you’ll see. If I say more I spoil things (Though, still, thanks for chimming in. At some point I am bound to fuck up something, or something you bring up will catch my eye, I just know it. So I am grateful that you are giving pokes ^^)9938174
Changelings would definitely be interesting to see. And having Evan get a chance to knock up queen bugbutt? Hell yes.
I do hope to see them sometime in the future should the story allow it. I just don't want to see him game over, so to speak. They'll definitely be challenging to overcome, and Chrysalis would no doubt be highly hostile towards him, even moreso than Celestia is currently being. She's not the most hospitable.
From what I can gather from the strawpoll, every body (22 people as of this comment) bitched out and chose the easy option. Interestingly, I find my self rather enjoying this fic. It reminds me of Universal Acceptance and it's sequel, which I thoroughly enjoyed as well.
By the way, I noticed that a lot of the comments answering the Choose-your-own-adventure questions are adding in a lot of detail like who and what they think the protagonist should interact with and how that should go about. Is that how you want people to answer those questions, or would you rather they just choose one of the options listed and let you show the consequences of that path without inputting their own spins on how it should go? Just curious what your thoughts on that are.
Love this so far, can't wait for more.
9966276
I mean I picked what I thought was best.... I didnt want it to be easy, but I also didnt want it to be Fubar! Fubar means the story pretty much ends.... Atleast in my eyes.... So a nice middle ground between difficult but not death.
Super enjoying the story thus far! Keep up the writing this is great, and sexy, and great! Can hardly wait to see what will happen next!
Well, shit. Hello people! It is A LOT late (Fuck spelling), but I am coming back. An accident and RL (more info in the next chapter when it comes) have made me step out for far longer than expected. Sorry about it. Still, it DID give me time to fiddle around with what I wanted to do, and it made me realize that I should take my time doing this because, in all honesty, I tried to rush things until life kicked me in the nuts. So I'll be back soon(ish)™ with good quality, though not much smut (yet). Rushing it up didn’t feel good, so the next two chapters won’t have almost (or no) porn.
Six onwards? Oh fuck. It GREATLY depends on you guys, but if you want to be perverts, we WILL be perverts
9966276
As I stated previously: If you give more details, and I like the idea, you get a fat slab of a mention for it. If I am asking for a species for a character to appear, and you MAKE a character profile (Seeing how I do things I'll be anal retentive about details, but you lose nothing if you try!) that I like? Then you also get said credits anytime the character gets into the action because, hey, technically speaking it is yours.
So yes, if you want to give details, ideas, etc, and I think they work. CREDITS! You guys deserve that much if you give me inspiration If you just want to vote? That is just as welcome ^^. The story won't be any good if you guys don't have interest, and voting is a very good way of showing it.
10074226
Hopefully the next chapter will be up this upcoming week! Since you probably have read the whole thing, you probably know why it took so long (Sorry once more!). Also: FUBAR wouldn't have meant things went to permanent shitcreek without a paddle, but it would've been... interesting so to speak. And hey! You should choose what you like first and foremost :3