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With Celestia not trusting Evan, strengthening the bonds with Cadence is paramount. With her at his side, the odds of survival increase dramatically. Option three makes sense.
Plus, maybe Shining Armor as a partner. Whoo Shiny!!!
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Option 3 :)
Fuck I love everything about this. Well... the game mechanics are maybe a little heavy handed, but you're taking advantage of them in fun ways so I can appreciate it.
I can't help but notice option 1 still includes Adultery. Our little Batty has a wife, huh? I hope we get to meet his family after we get more acquainted. Maybe he even has kids, and we can teach them all about Daddy's new job~
I'd really like to get that over with as soon as possible, and introduce the toy we're lucky enough to just be handed to his new responsibilities, but... It looks like option 3 is too much to pass up. Maybe it'll be helpful to get in a bit more practice before trying to fully resculpt a personal slut, anyway. Though, I feel like convincing a dutiful guard that his alien charge has very specific needs he has a responsiblity to take care of shouldn't be hard.
Other notes: I really appreciate the nonchalance of some statements... an offhand reference to 'correcting' Celestia was wonderful. "Massive spikes in corruption can break a psyche permanently." is also something we'll have to test out, though it might take some time before we have the freedom and power and moral degradation to find somepony disposable for it.
I can't help but notice that first on the list of Evan's noted fetishes was Incest. Unfortunately his whole family is stuck in another universe, so... I'm proposing a long term goal of getting Time Travel so he can get the real experience with a lovely daughter without having to wait a decade.
Corruption is the best~
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Hey, thanks! And yes: Corruption is good! But yeah. Game Mechanics was more or less a thing I wanted to put in when I began fiddling with the story, cos I didn't want to make Evan all superpowered like, not anytime soon. Broken in a sense? Yes (This story is for fun, and not an adventure on itself, after all), but not All-Might kind of broken. I just went with the option that sounded better in my head.
And does the guard (Likely a Thestral unless people vote otherwise) have a family? Yush. As I see it (and how this Equestria works at least) A LOT of the remaining males are in the guard (There ARE females, though. We may see some.), and many live in Canterlot. More often than not they pick up the customs of the nobles to fit in better with the 'poss' people around. That usually means marrying instead of herding, otherwise seen as very bad form outside of Canterlot itself. So yush, whoever he is, he likely has a family. The details may vary if you guys want something specific, though. [And you'll have to wait until chapter 4 because people REALLY think it is better to corrupt Cadence some more, hah!]
Now, breaking someone's mind a bit? Depends... I mean, Evan has his own little preferences, and he KNOWS about FIMFICTION XD So one idea he has is... Well, Spoilers here! He wants to turn Rainbow into a bimbo with big udders, willing to have fun with him whenever he wants, and stupidly submissive, all of this in private of course, because he found one story in here that he liked. It may or may not go overboard, but it shouldn't (Probably) screw Rainbow in public/permanently... too much. He does like the character, and likely will like the pony in this Equestria, so he may try to fix it if he fucks up (after all, Evan is not an asshole. Pervert? Yes, but not bad). Someone like Spoiled, however...
Speaking of his family: Next chapter was going to have a bit on that with Cadence no matter the choice that you guys picked (I NEED to have a few things set in stone beforehand after all), so you'll see why the poor guy is like he is. Well, some of the reasons anyway.
But yes, Time Travel. There is a very interesting section in the Castle anyway, and having M.O.C will help a lot. Plus... Eh, I think that is enough spoilers for you, so I'll let that cliffhanger RIGHT there so you can ruminate on the possibilities.
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Go go Girly Armor! And yeah, it is logical indeed... But what fun is there in making sense, eh?
In this story? A lot of fun *Wink, wink, nudge, nudge.*
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>Evan is not an asshole
Well, he has time to learn. The longer he walks around with the ability edit any pony's thoughts, the more he'll realize that everyone only really exists as either a Toy or a Threat.
Hmmm. I wonder if Evan's inclination towards bigness means he appreciates hefty boy bits, or the inclination of straightness and domination means we'll be seeing some emasculated little clitties... We might not get to find out just yet, either, because if he's going to play with Cadance and Shiny, I think the needy whore's desire to be utterly filled would come first. It might be fun to leave Shining as a tiny femboy, unable to even start to please his wife, and have Cadance no option to beg Evan for relief when she needs it, but that's a bit inconvienent and conspicious for now.
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Number 3
I hope you go easy on us with the whole skill/attribute and POWER usage thing. I'm pretty sure without constant exposure, I'm gonna forget just about everything you've cooked up.
Will you role dice or something each time Evan has sex and creampies a pony to see if they get pregnant?
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As said: I'll likely have the 'Extra Bits' section on top with a link for everything miscellaneous and its status at the start of the chapter. Otherwise I'll likely forget too! I like details, but sometimes I create too much, so that'll help everyone as anal about info as I am.
As for dice rolling? Yes, yes I will, but in private (Otherwise it would be clutter). You won't see it, but I will be doing it when appropriate using this, so you now know where I go to pray to the RNG Gods.
BTW, they took the piss with me in the next chapter. I may say why at the end of it, once I complete the damn thing. Expect it tomorrow... Or monday. Either or.
I didn't think I would get really into this story, especially with all the game mechanics going on at first, but I found that it actually goes pretty well along with the story and what's going on.
I wonder where the different skills and traits will lead him, and who he'll end up getting closer to and breeding. Cadence definitely seems like a likely option so far. Hopefully we see Shining Armor become Gleaming Shield, heh.
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Glad to hear you ended up en joying the story ^^. Hopefully that will continue being the case. As to where it will lead him? Well, we shall see ;)
Good chpter. Well done.
I like this story so far but I have some questions for this story:
Q1. So will he have sex with other creatures too? Like Dragons, Zebras, Yaks, Diamond Dogs, Changelings, Minotaurs, Centaurs, Abyssinians (the anthropomorphic cat people from the MlP:FIM comic series), Deers (from the MLP: FIM comic series), Gargoyles (like Tirek's mother, Queen Haydon from the MLP: FIM comic series here), those anthropomorphic parrots people (like Captain Celaeno from the movie), the ancient Anugyptian Jackals (from the MLP:FIM comic here and here ), Kirins, Griffons, Hippogriffs.
Q2. And will he encounter characters like Garble the Dragon, pre-Dragonlord Ember, Smolder the young dragoness, Yona the Yak, Ocellus the Changeling, Silverstream the Hippogriff, Discord before he was reform, King Sombra, Princess Amore (from the MLP:FIM comics), Lord Tirek, Queen Chryalis, Nightmare Moon, Princess Luna, King Thorax, Pharynx, King Aspen (from the MLP: FIM comics), Gilda, Bulk Biceps, The Main Six, The Pillars of the Equestria?
Q3. Will everyone that he impregnated will give birth a human hybrid with human-looking form (that look something like Derpibooru: 462558, 306091)? Like him having sex with Cadence would leads her to giving birth to Flurry Heart as a anthropomorphic pony.
Q4. Will he do stuff that will change important events of the canon show thus changing things from canon show? Like him defeating Discord instead of the Main Six.
Q5. Will he use the time travel ability to travel to the past to change the history Equestria or travel to the past to transform a villain into something preferable like sexy slutty female version of them so he can deal with them in the present?
And some ideas for Abilities, Traits, Skills:
Time Replacing/Replacing the Past with Future/Skip to Adulthood (these are the names that I thought up for this ability but you can give this ability name if think up good one): A ability that allows the user to replace anyone that he chose with a older or lot mature version of that person something like instantly having them skip to a mature age and everyone would remember the person's age that they were skip to as their real current age despite not having any memory of them growing up to their current age and everyone (except for the user) even the victim believe that the person that have been replace with a older and mature version of themselves have always been like that despite them now acting and looking more mature. Like the user can use this ability on baby Flurry Heart to skip her into her adulthood so the user can sex with her or use it on Spike skip him to a mature age.
Morphing Touch: can be use to give other creatures human forms or human features. Like turning a pony into a hot anthro with a huge human cock and ball or turning a creature's cock and balls into a huge human cock and balls (like this pic here Derpibooru: 1690548) and these human characteristics and features will be pass on to their offsprings. This ability can be use on Garble the Dragon to turn his dragon cock and balls into a soft and expose human junk that is very sensitive making it a easy target for some cock and balls shots. Or he can just embarrass Garble in a fight by slowly turning his strong dragon body into a sexy human-like body (similar to this Derpibooru: 555316) with a small human cock and balls with his touch which results with Garble moving awkwardly (due to being in a new form) and having hard time fighting the human . And despite Garble now having a body that similar to thw human's everybody still act like nothing change due to the ability making them think that Garble's body have always been like that. And after Garble embarrassingly lost the fight the other Dragons would started teasing Garble that he got easily beat by a weak small human which cause Garble to awkwardly walk off with his dragon flunkies as his now human cock and balls uncomfortably flop around with each step out in the open (with nobody aware of what have really happen) . Or he could just use to give a hot busty female human-like body like here Derpibooru: 1643196 (while his dragon head is still male) which resulted with him now having huge bouncy human breast and his feet have heels on them that make him walk like he is wearing high heel shoes while he also make his body very sensitive too thus making every move that Garble makes will make him very arouse. Maybe Evan could this ability on Torch the Dragonlord to turn the giant Dragon's body into human-like body with a giant human cock and balls similar to this Derpibooru: 1142513 (while still being the same size) maybe having foreskin.
Human Features/Human Characteristics: This ability is basically the same human idea of the Morphing Touch ability to give others human physical characteristics and form. I'm just making it a separate ability just in case the Morphing Touch ability can't do that. This ability can give other some physical characteristics and attributes of a human like turning a normal pony body into a anthro pony human-like body or changing a pony's cock and balls into a huge version of a human cock and balls, giving human breast, hands and feet, etc and this can be use on any race (like this Derpibooru: 1454918) and the physical human characteristics and features will also be pass down on to their offsprings. Evan could use this ability on Lyra Heartstrings because of her human fetish to give her a anthro body with human hands and feet with some huge human breast. He then test out Lyra's new form by having sex with her and due to tje nature of the ability it also make everyone even including Lyra herself (minus Evan) think that she have always been like that so nobody wouldn't notices anything strange about her and afterwards Lyra admits that she feel different for some reason like she is in new body or something but in a good and because of this exciting feeling she wait to get home and have some with her marefriend, Bon Bon.
Time Travel: Here some ideas that you can do with that ability. You have Evan travel back the past and do stuff that will change the current present like turning Lord Tirek into a sexy Lady Tirek (like here Derpibooru: 623818) or King Sombra in a hot nude anthro version of himself (like here derpibooru: 149785 or 174999) or turn Discord of past into female slut so when they show up in the present they would be that version of them. Or maybe while Evan is in past he would have sex with the founding ancestors of some of the many races that made the Equestria of the present which causes almost every race in the present now to have a anthro form with human characteristics (similar to this Derpibooru: 1523814) due to his human traits being pass down through multiple generations but still having habits of their species (like not wearing any clothes most of time).
The Dragon Layer: This is a trait that be gain from doing it with a Dragon. This trait give Evan some attributes of Dragons like being fire and heat proof and some Dragon strength which will make next time with a Dragon easier. And it also make Dragons to find very Evan attractive.
Yak Smasher: This is a trait that be gain from doing it with a Yak. This trait give Evan some attributes of a Yak like some Yak strength and Yak endurance that will it easier next with a Yak. And it also make Yaks find Evan very attractive.
Pussy Master: This is a trait that be gain from doing it with a Abyssinian that will give Evan some attributes of a Abyssinian like their cat-like reflexes and flexibility and their cat sight. And it also make them find Eva to be very attractive.
Dragon Compatibility: This is a trait that will allow Evan's body to handle having sex with any type of Dragons no matter the size or how hot the Dragon is.
Yak Compatibility: This trait is the Yak equivalent of the Dragon Compatibility trait. That will Evan's body to handle having sex with any strong Yaks.
Abyssinian Compatibility: This trait is basically a Abyssinian version of the compatibility trait that allows Evan's body to handle anything that any Abyssinians can.
Breast Expansion: This ability is similar to the Morphing Touch ability but only breast bigger. And it allows the user be able anyone's breast as big as he want as long he have the magic for it (it possible for Evan make breast as mountains if he have the magic for it). And if a individual was altered by this ability have offsprings then the altered traits will be pass down to their offspring.
Cock Expansion/Pussy Expansion: This ability is similar to the Breast Expansion ability but it is use to expand anyone's cock or pussy to any size the user want. And the altered traits will be pass down to their offsprings.
Butt Expansion: This ability allows the user to grow anyone's butt to any size the user want. And altered traits will be pass down to their offsprings.
Balls Expansion: This ability is basically the balls version of the Cock Expansion ability it allows the user grow anyone's balls to any size the user want. And altered traits will be pass down to their offsprings.
And here a idea that you can use for a chapter and this idea was inspired by this pic Derpibooru 1943657:
Evan use his abilities on the Abyssinian King and King Aspen, the king of the Deers, turning them into hot anthro babes with super large boobs when they visit Celestia so they can discuss some things (you know rulers stuff). While waiting for Celestia the two royalties encounter the human and were very curious about him which leads them talking with human. And as they talk Evan would subtly change the two monarchs giving them a female anthro form and while making their body very sensitive and making them very openly about sex. It lead to them all having sex in the waiting room and afterwards finally Celestia show up to greet the waiting monarchs but Celestia seems to only notices that the monarchs seem different somehow but can't put her hoof while the two monarchs just comments that nothing is different about them but to the nature of Evan's abilities which alter everyone's memory (except for Evan) making everyone think that they have always been like that. After Evan dodge the bullet Celestia offer the now two anthro busty female monarchs into her throne room so they discuss their business there the monarch says their goodbyes to Evan and thanks him for helping them passing the time and while they walk behind Celestia the monarchs huge breast bounce as they walk and Evan get one last look of the monarchs' hot female form from behind before walking out of the waiting room.
And that everything for now. And if you want to know more details on any of those ideas and about any of the Abilities/Skills/Traits etc just ask.
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I vote for option 2.
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! Give me a sec here and I'll do my best at an answer without spoilers... I think!
Holy comments Batman
1: Yes. Simple enough. Zebras and Changelings? For sure. The when and 'how', the last one a bigger maybe, will likely depend a bit on you guys, though at some point I'll make it happen cos I want to if you don't vote on it. The others? Meeeebe :)? I'd say deer and centaurs are very likely. Gargoyles and Gryphons too. The rest? Maybe less so. If you guys want it I don't see why not to be fully honest.
2: Some characters yes, others... likely not? This is an ALT universe, and Evan will change a lot of stuff. He also more or less stopped watching the series (Cos he didn't have the time) after a point, so he will likely go for his favorites first, and others may happen. Won't make promises, though. That, and I hope to push a few OCs here to not burden everything on canon characters.
3: Here I can safely say I don't have a clue! Mostly because I didn't plan that far ahead. However, my original intent was for them all to remain 'feral', not 'anthro'. But who knows? We'll see.
4: Yes
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5: Also yes (I mean, it was super implied
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6: As for skills and the like… Well, that is a far more touchy subject, so for now, no comments on that front.
Holy fuck. It is done. Should've been faster, but meh. RL is a bitch, let's leave it at that.
Anyway: If you guys vote for one of the choices, and want to suggest your own name, if it is a gal guard or a guy guard, or even the family composition (Fuck it, why not?), do mention your voting choice in the comment (Don't try to cheat the Railgunner! I will fuck you up from Mars, I swear!). Remember that if I like the choice and pick it, you get mentioned in the credits section (for good or ill *Evil laugh button needed*).
Have a good day everyone. (Or night, 'cos it is nearly two in the morning and I am dying)
Will this story have any m/f sex scenes, implied or otherwise, where the woman does most or all of the work?
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Likely in some, yush.
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Mare bat who needs to be broken into realizing her destiny is nothing but a cockslave because she's utterly failed at empathy or understanding the value of different species her entire life
with a cute husband who didn't get much choice in their relationship and now feels trapped by it, a rebellious teenage son who hasn't gotten the parenting he deserved so is starting to act out, and a precocious little filly who's worried by her family never seeming happy
Option 1 please :)
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https://www.strawpoll.me/18898947
I think the poll link is a bit hard to see in the chapter - everyone should make sure they don't miss it!
Plz tell me we're going to eventually have slutty subby spike. Having cucked shining and subby fat bottumed (male and young) spike is super enticeing. Either way this story is watched.
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Batboop! *Boop* You perverse little thing... But hey, thestral is wining for now with the votes in here (barely, surprisingly), so maybe!
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Made it more visible. I swear I changed the color to blue in the document before posting... Maybe I forgot? *Hides*
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Most likely yes. Was thinking Spike version Saurian to be honest, but we'll see.
My personal vote is for the unicorn. I like batponies and all, but I do want to see a bit less hostility. Though she's unsure of how/if magic will effect Evan, I suspect it's also something that she'd want to figure out so she can better plan how to deal with him going forward.
Maybe a MILF of a unicorn guard mare, perhaps with a younger teen daughter mare. Maybe she's a bit frustrated or tired of the same ol' routine day in and out, and is secretly happy to have the chance to prove she can do more by guarding/watching Evan. Could lead to new experiences in the future - though maybe not quite how she thinks!
...yeah I'm not good with stories
Well people, I am back for today. Since yesterday my last check made it look like it was very close I allowed the voting to go over through the night to see what it was going to happen and... Holy fuck. Thestrals lost by a (small) landslide. I mean, even counting the ones here as if you guys hadn't voted in the poll, there is still 5 points of difference. That is quite a lot more than I thought there would be after yesterday (I mean, I thought I'd see one or two points of difference at best).
So yeah, Unicorn it is. I'll get to it right away and (hopefully) I won't make you guys wait half afucking month this time. Sorry Ex! The bat family will have to wait.
See you guys soon.
(Also, no one voted for pegasi. You fuken racists
!)
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I voted for option 6. If the one with Changeling win Evan could tumble upon the guard and find out that he is a Changeling in disguise. Evan could use his Hypnotic Touch (while using his knowledge of Queen Chryalis that he watch crom the show) on the Changeling to convince him to spy on both Princess Celestia and Queen Chryalis as his double agent and giving Evan info that might be useful to him later on. At first Evan doesn't let Princess Cadance know about his Changeling double agent but he will eventually reveal it to her when the time is right.
And it's seem that Evan need to be on a enough high level to be able to impregnate powerful beings like Alicorns let just hope that Evan will be on a high enough level when he encounters powerful characters like Discord so he will able to impregnate them.
And here some more questions that I forgot to ask before:
Q1. Will Even's appearance will change over time into a cartoonish appearance that fit the cartoon world of MLP? Kinda like here (the third one at the bottom).
Q2. Will Cosmos, Cpic2, Discord's crazy ex-girlfriend from the comic series will make appearance in this story?
EDITED: And some more ideas for skills, abilities, Traits, etc:
Chaotic Attraction/Chaotic Nature: This is a trait that the [player] can only gain it by doing it with a Draconequus. This trait will make draconequui find the [player] very attractive. And it also allows the [player] to resist the effects of chaos magic and reality warping magic.
Paradox Immunity/Time Immunity: This ability can be gain after using the Time Travel ability for the first time. This ability allows the [player] to be immune to any time altering paradoxes that the [player] might cause (like if he accidentally kill his past self or something like but it won't effects the current one. So in theory the [player] can kill his past self then take his place) thus allowing paradoxes like the [player] being able to have sex with himself if he wants. And the ability also make the [player] Immune to any time manipulating spells.
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Sadly, changelings will have to wait! Shame, ‘cos as soon as I thought about that idea I liked it, but hey, I find equally fun giving you guys a say in this all. Also, teeeechnically Evan could do it right now... If he is stupidly lucky/does it 24/7 for a couple of months. If you throw enough dice you'll get a perfect score sooner or later, eh? (Also, he could, I dunno, knock up Chrysalis far easier than most ponies, but that is because Changelings cheat ;), if you know what I mean)
Now, as for questions?
.-1: Aah... good ol' Karno... But Evan IS already a bit toony, but likely around the middle (3 or 4), as I pointed out in the first chapter (Not the intro). He still looks slightly 'realistic', but not overly so. To us it would look like a cartoon in the olden days, to the ponies it probably looks just different, less colorful and generally darker in a sense. It probably doesn't help when it comes to feeling safe around him, and probably makes him look rugged and the like.
.-2: Nnnnnno, sorry. Not because she wouldn't be interesting, but for other reasons that will be spoken about sooner or later. Not going to make spoilers here (I mean, beyond answering the question).
As such I will only tell you that the Time Paradox bit is basically built in when it comes to fucking up with time. The ones that made the M.O.C and all this had things well planned out, you know? (
Fucking bullshit. I make it up as I go!) Don't pay attention to that one. Alternative selves are such assholes. In any case: Evan, once he can travel through time, will have certain limiters built in. But you’ll see, you’ll see. If I say more I spoil things (Though, still, thanks for chimming in. At some point I am bound to fuck up something, or something you bring up will catch my eye, I just know it. So I am grateful that you are giving pokes ^^)9938174
Changelings would definitely be interesting to see. And having Evan get a chance to knock up queen bugbutt? Hell yes.
I do hope to see them sometime in the future should the story allow it. I just don't want to see him game over, so to speak. They'll definitely be challenging to overcome, and Chrysalis would no doubt be highly hostile towards him, even moreso than Celestia is currently being. She's not the most hospitable.
From what I can gather from the strawpoll, every body (22 people as of this comment) bitched out and chose the easy option. Interestingly, I find my self rather enjoying this fic. It reminds me of Universal Acceptance and it's sequel, which I thoroughly enjoyed as well.
By the way, I noticed that a lot of the comments answering the Choose-your-own-adventure questions are adding in a lot of detail like who and what they think the protagonist should interact with and how that should go about. Is that how you want people to answer those questions, or would you rather they just choose one of the options listed and let you show the consequences of that path without inputting their own spins on how it should go? Just curious what your thoughts on that are.
Love this so far, can't wait for more.
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I mean I picked what I thought was best.... I didnt want it to be easy, but I also didnt want it to be Fubar! Fubar means the story pretty much ends.... Atleast in my eyes.... So a nice middle ground between difficult but not death.
Super enjoying the story thus far! Keep up the writing this is great, and sexy, and great! Can hardly wait to see what will happen next!
Well, shit. Hello people! It is A LOT late (Fuck spelling), but I am coming back. An accident and RL (more info in the next chapter when it comes) have made me step out for far longer than expected. Sorry about it. Still, it DID give me time to fiddle around with what I wanted to do, and it made me realize that I should take my time doing this because, in all honesty, I tried to rush things until life kicked me in the nuts. So I'll be back soon(ish)™ with good quality, though not much smut (yet). Rushing it up didn’t feel good, so the next two chapters won’t have almost (or no) porn.
Six onwards? Oh fuck. It GREATLY depends on you guys, but if you want to be perverts, we WILL be perverts
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As I stated previously: If you give more details, and I like the idea, you get a fat slab of a mention for it. If I am asking for a species for a character to appear, and you MAKE a character profile (Seeing how I do things I'll be anal retentive about details, but you lose nothing if you try!) that I like? Then you also get said credits anytime the character gets into the action because, hey, technically speaking it is yours.
So yes, if you want to give details, ideas, etc, and I think they work. CREDITS! You guys deserve that much if you give me inspiration
If you just want to vote? That is just as welcome ^^. The story won't be any good if you guys don't have interest, and voting is a very good way of showing it.
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Hopefully the next chapter will be up this upcoming week! Since you probably have read the whole thing, you probably know why it took so long (Sorry once more!). Also: FUBAR wouldn't have meant things went to permanent shitcreek without a paddle, but it would've been... interesting so to speak. And hey! You should choose what you like first and foremost :3
Here it is, at fucking last! I said it would be posted the first week and I made it! Barely. Anyway, hope you guys enjoy.
Not what I expected, but as long as their is still manipulation and sex going on I don't mind.
Is Reverse Ryona one of the fetishes in this story?
any idea when we can expect an update and new chapter?
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Sorry to say that, until things calm down fully, or at least fully stabilize, writing more is a bit secondary on my end :< I do hope to get back to this before summer ends (Fingers crossed).
I like how randomness plays a large role in shaping the story. Hopefully RNG plays nice for the next couple chapters though.
When I saw that Celestia is, yet again, antagonistic to our main character, I was like GODS DAMN IT!!!
He should at least feel relieved that herds are a thing in this equestria (via the lack of males) like in many others.
Don't forget the effect of [Addictive cum] are still acting on Cadence. After all she consumed an entire leveled up load.
As long as the story stays as good as it is, like seriously some are badly written, done without emotion, etc.
While this story might as well have a [New Life of a Crow] situation a.k.a the mean story here [1] and here's the mature chapters/parts on a separate page [2].
Although via the mature chapters/parts importance to the story I would recommend this to possible future stories if they're not in the same situation.
So one story could be there for those who are there for the story, while the one who are only there for the clop/porn can go straight to it. But for those who are there for both they can switch what page there at in order to complete the story clop and all.