Rainbow has issues dealing with heat, in more than more way...
Interesting take on mind control...
Normally I don't like Sub!Starlight, but since it's with Dom!Dash, I'm okay with it
Think you could separate the speakers into separate paragraphs? It wasn't too bad in previous chapters as there wasn't a lot of talking but here it is a confusing mess.
Interesting take on mind control...
Normally I don't like Sub!Starlight, but since it's with Dom!Dash, I'm okay with it
Think you could separate the speakers into separate paragraphs? It wasn't too bad in previous chapters as there wasn't a lot of talking but here it is a confusing mess.